Please update
This story is amazing

I like seeing Draco starting to question things. He really is intelligent and it would make sense that he doesn’t take everything at face value as he gets older

Thank you! Lucius is such an ass. I really like Adrianus. He would’ve been such a great dad to Draco.

Just found this. Love it! Hope Lucius gets the smack down from karma he deserves.

Thank god for Adrianus stopping Narcissa . Can’t wait for more of what happened to him

This is so good! Can’t wait for more

Hey great story! You have a few grammar/mechanics issues but not enough to ruin the enjoyability of the story and although I think it is a bit out if character I really enjoy your story and look forward to the next chapter. If you would like an editor to read through for grammar mistakes I would be happy to, but if not I am still excited to enjoy the rest of this story!

Heartbreaking

One thing, when writing using “he is” instead of “he’s” make it choppy to read and too formal for the rest of your writing style. It’s often like that with others of a similar nature “it is” would have made that sentence feel bulky and formally written.

Please Lucius brother didn’t die... Lucius probably helped him have an accident...

A little OOC but it’s a fun read.

Not a bad thought!