It was quite interesting. Need to say that I love your writing style, English isnt my first tongue but I didn't have any problems reading your story.

Hope to read you again soon.

I think the ONLY thing that bothers me about your story as a whole, is Ash's age. Mathematically, by the time Ash gets to Alola, he should be 17 borderline 18 due to all the side tracking he gets into. But hey thats just one fans opinion. Continue to do a great job.

New reader here, loving this story. Can't wait for more!
I like how you write your battle scenes and how well you portray these characters. I do hope we see the original Alola team along with the new faces! (I've always thought Ash should've gotten a Jangmo-O.)
Question: Would you consider writing Greninja back into the story? I admit he's a huge favorite of mine in the anime and I never understood why they wrote him out the way they did.

Igual de emocionante y a la vez entretenido, me encanto la primera batalla entre pikachu y tapu koko, aunque muy diferente de como era en la serie, pero tampoco es que me queje, me agradan los cambios mas aun cuando me sorpremden como hiciste ahora, bueno estoy esperando con ansias para ver que es lo que tienes preparado para los siguientes capitulos de esta historia y a la vez estoy esperando tambien la de la recompenza justa de ash, que aunque lo creas o no lo estoy leyendo de nuevo para asi matar el tiempo hasta el siguiente capitulo, bueno no hay mas nada que decir por mi parte asi que aqui desgarbiuz despidiendose y dicendo adios.

Loving this story so far and can’t wait for more of it. I pretty sure both Kukui and Kiawe will explain to Ash with Ash asking for a Pokémon Battle with Kiawe to demonstrate later.

Also, can’t wait for when Pikachu and the rest of Ash’s team meet and interact with the Pokémon of the SM Gang.

I can’t wait to see a classic team rocket incident occurring since there was not enough of them in Ash’s Just Reward. It’ll have to occur after school so only Ash and the SM Gang will interact with Team Rocket and not Qito and his students.

Hope Ash eventually tells them how many legendaries he’s met and their reactions!

I think the battle is great, better than that of the canon showing that Pikachu is a very powerful pokemon after all he has had many battles with pokemon of all kinds (I still feel somewhat uncomfortable when remembering when a rookie with his snivy defeated him just because zekrom nerfed his electricity)

I just realized how funny Pikachu jotting notes is now that I am re reading it.

interesting

This was awesome! Your writing style is so refreshing compared to some other fanfics with more complex words. By the way, I would really love for you to bring some old characters back. The characters from Altomare especially. It might be a good idea to permanently bring back Brock. He is one of the best known characters and has a lot knowledge. I can't wait for the next chapter!

welcome back thank you awesome chapter

One thing I always appreciated about Sun and Moon, both anime and game, is that it introduces the legendaries early and throughout the story. Admittedly, the Ultra Beasts took that spot, but they aren't legendary. You don't have to wait to see the fruits of your labor, they practically come to you. That's what I like about the Guardians, they're hands on and always doing something interesting.

This was a fun chapter! Very fun! You choreographed that battle super well, that I could feel the impacts from both Pikachu and Tapu Koko. You made Pikachu as powerful as I imagine (and should) be. With all the powerful pokemon its faced, its thunderbolts should be strong enough to crack earth and shatter rocks.
I'm sure the audience watching is absolutely flabbergasted by Ash and will probably seek him out for . . . well anything. Nothing impresses the kids more then when you punch a god in the face. If that doesn't impress them enough to get them to listen to him, I don't know what will.

Hi! It's nice to see you doing well for yourself. Hopefully your career change is successful and your room's design is to your liking. This chapter was awesome! I've always been a little disappointed with how Pikachu's power is reset and it's nice to see it be unleashed. I love how you show Ash's quick thinking and Pikachu's full power. I'm excited to see Ash's and Qito's rivalry develop and see how they can bounce off of each other. In addition, I'm also excited for more Ash interacting with his students. I'm also always impressed with Ash's ability to teach. I'm just generally excited for more chapters. However, you shouldn't stress yourself out either. Your health is very important. Have a good day/night/noon!

Forgot to add this to the last chapter.
I don't really have much of an opinion on what pokemon the kids get. My vote is to make it a combo of anime and games, but I strangely have an idea for Lillie's Team. For a full Team it would be: VulpixNinetales, Clefairy, CutieflyRibombee, Magearna, Alolan Dugtrio, and SwabluAltaria. The last one is her ride pokemon, I always liked the idea of her brushing the hair of Alolan Dugtrio, and Cutiefly just always seemed like a good fit for her.

Oh I love this! This is a fun lesson! Any chance Ash can bring out more than six of his pokemon is always interesting. Must be fun to have the authority to go over the limit-outside of battling of course.

I imagine Brock and Misty will make a physical appearance at some point. Maye something similar to what happened in the anime? It's always good to see those two, no matter what though.

It's interesting to see Kukui was skeptical to have Ash have help out to the point he thought he'd make things worse. Things must have been really bad for him to not even have a positive outlook on just giving him a chance. Though looks like his worries were for naught since he's seeing small, but noticeable improvements on everyone. Well, everyone except Mallow. What's exactly her deal?

This Jangmo-o is sure serious. Definitely would get along with Sceptile or Snivy. Nice little glimpse we got of her background, seems like something major happened to make her seek out a trainer.

The Tapus meeting was certainly interesting. I'm always hit or miss when it comes to Ash being titled "Chosen One" but in this case I'm for it, simply because it gives Ash recognition to legendaries. Specifically the Guardians. Nice work on their personalities by the way. Koko always struck me as someone with a lot of energy to talk up a storm. Bulu is impatiently frustrated, but I think we could see a lazy side to him too like in the anime. Hell, he might just be grumpy because Koko pushed him out of bed. Lele and Fini didn't get much to show off their personalities, but Fini kind of came off as the most level headed of the four. Well, as level headed as a Guardian deity can be.

Considering how important these kids are, I would expect that if Qito or his students do something to them to worsen their progress, there could be reprimands for doing so.

welcome back! great chaoter!