Reviews for Ash, an Inspiration |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You are right. The battle wasn't the same as anime because it was LOADS better than anime! I couldn't pull my eyes away from the words! I was just so engrossed in it! I LOVED IT! IT WAS AMAZING! Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long and looking forward to reading Ash's just reward! Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes this was a satisfying battle. love seeing Ash getting serious for once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The battle was amazing! Wonder what's up with Qito hmm... eh whatever- he can't beat Ash lol Also that cliffhanger aaaaahhhh Thanks for this awesome chapter! Best of luck in your new course! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good battle! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's always good to see this story updated. That battle was awesome, I love seeing Ash get down to business when he's battling a powerful opponent. I love the way you captured this battle, you've got a talent for making your battles come alive in ways many writers (myself included, if I'm being honest) just aren't able to. It's not often that I can truthfully say that a story feels like watching an episode of the show, but this one captures that exceedingly well. I especially love how Ash seems so casual compared to his students and Professor Kukui, and even kinda ruins the moment there at the end with his asking what a Z-ring is. You write a more mature Ash far better than pretty much anyone I've ever seen on this platform as you still manage to keep him in character, and that's something not many people bother with. Good show Warlord, as always, you've left me wanting more with the next chapter. I do have a question though, seeing as Brock and Misty canonically show up in Alola, are you planning on having them appear again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s great to see that your back! I love this story and I’m excited to see it continued |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D glad to hear from you! this story is so fun and really well done! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Jangmo-o was wondering if they can make her stronger. If Pikachu display shows that not only Infernape is a powerhouse but all of them. Her reaction will be the most priceless as the one looking for was not a pokemon but the trainer of them, Ash is perhaps an anomaly in the kommo-o line of approach of battle. One thing will make me wonder, her return to Poni with this Family behind her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gooooooooooooossssssssshhhhhhhhhh you blew my head out of the water with this chapter like WHATTTTT THE BATTLE PIKACHU VS TAPU KOKO IS EPICCCCCCCCCC! I can't believe it like WOWWWWW! I LOVE all the interactions and reactions you made happen! Ah, I really LOVE how you make Charizard so caring for Ash in this story! I LOVE how you added that Ash's Pokemons are immediately on guard the moment Tapu Koko appeared and are prepared to fight the moment it attacks! I LOVE you GENIUS idea for last chapter but this chapter is a whole different type of amazing! It's like EPICALLY INCREDIBLE! Big big bigggggggg appreciations for the descriptions on how lethal their electric attacks are! Especially Pikachu's! I LOVE how you show Kukui's different reaction towards Tapu Koko's appearance! Also, here comes Qito! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter! It had style, twists & hard hitting action. I loved the returned use of volt tackle & counter shield. Will Ash explain the difference between a person who is a B & C? I do miss reading about him teach his students, but I did enjoy the battle. Well Done & Great Work! I hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good battle, and it seems like Qito is genuinely taking Ash seriously from now on. Welcome back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome battle, from what I can tell it looks like it ended in a draw and with Tapu Koko impressed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update :) |