Good luck with the story publishing the story I hope it goes well. Also I know I’ve already mentioned contest and how that’s going to work so do you think he’s going to bring up a mega evolution because I’m pretty sure at least one Pokémon there can currently use it just got to be cool to cook a QQ and get a cooler team just a few suggestions love you writing can’t hate take care of your real life. I can’t wait for your stories. Good luck and hope you have a great day

Love the work. Can’t wait to see what you come up with for the catchers and I was just wondering going to bring up contest battles at some point because I feel like he’s gonna be bringing up at least once or twice maybe for later idea. Love the work keep it up and you know when I should get there or if he gets that valet do you think it’s gonna be the Arceus one he fighting for in one where it was I can’t remember if you said a curiosity keep up the great work. Love you

Nice to see that you’re still writing even after all this time. It’s been awhile since I’ve seen this fic so I had to reread everything from the beginning to jog my memory. Hey so I was wondering if you’ll do any shipping with Ash and the Alolan girls. They are my favorites out of Ash’s female companions, and I honestly want to see him with all of them. Nice to see this story is still alive and kicking. Keep it up.

Thanks for the update. Best of luck with the publication.

Good chapter, just a small nipicking is that Ash's Tauros pokeball are green with a S on it, not regular pokeball.

Man I was never a big fan of Alola in the anime or the game, but you seriously have written something special here. Mentor ash is always fun to read x) keep it up!

First off congrats on your first novel _
On to your story I love your concept of Ash as a teacher so far. I cant wait to read what else you have planned in the future. Lol maybe a mew will pop up wanting to play or maybe Victini will pop up. Definitly would be a good learning expirience for Ash’s students.

Thank you for sharing your idea and I hope everything is going wonderful with your first published story. 3333

I just want to imagine Arceus deciding to visit her chosen one because she want scratches or something trivial and everyone straight up blacking out from shock while he does what she asks with a normal face.

He's Alive! He's arceus damn alive!

Incredible friend, it's a story that I just discovered and I'm honestly really liking it.I hope you upload the next part soon.

Hey Hey Hey! It's been a while, sport! It's nice to see ya again.

Mm, I missed this story! It's pretty cool. I like where you're going with the little Dragon Girl. Also Pignite rocks.

Your characterization is pretty solid. I guess I don't have anything to say you don't already know! Lol.

IT'S BACK AGAIN! ONCE AGAIN! AN OG FIC OF ASH, AN INSPIRATION!

And oh Qito...you poor summer child.

You HAVE to have one of the top legendary Pokémon come to Alola, Qito tries to battle it and gets manslaughtered then Ash comes and just treats it like a family friend.

Have Lugia or Giratina come!

A new chapter! soooo happy to see you back

i love the taurus scene at the end and how you manage to slip them in this story somehow thanks for the very much appreciated update i'm glad this wasn't abandoned

I'm happy to see any sort of update.
Semms like the locals still need to process how much of an anomaly Ash is.
Good luck with your writing!