"What's to stop them from just reopening the wartime declaration? Those do last until the stated goal of the war is completed, after all. You're implying they can't add or change things once we make the declaration" Arthur asks, and I give him a positively evil grin - which he can't see."

I had thought Arthur had died several chapters ago. It's just a small typo, change the name and you are good :p
Kudos and lots of love for your work.

Chapter 79
This was awesome!

You've spun such a wonderful tale!
Keep Going! Keep Crafting your Wonderful World in the Vast ocean that is the Multiverse
May the Muses sing to you their song and help write the story you have drawn.

Tt

great story. hope the author comes back to it.

Will you continue What is a Game?
If not, at least summarize what would happen next.

Content Warning: Extremely slow paced. Like, up to 2x the original book. The MC is a pick me who wants everyone to like her and doesn't want an 'easy time'. Supposed to have the talent of a magical titan but is generally a Curse Breaking version of og Harry. The author pushes the story in a direction and it follows even if it has to contradict itself. All in all, not my cup of tea but good grammer and paragraphing. I dropped it so idk if she ever implemented anything from her old magic system, but she seems enthralled by this new one.

I caught the itch to come back and reread this. While its a first draft and has some typos and inconsistencies/contradictions (for example, during the triwizard arc, you had Godric call her Hawthorn even though she told no one her name; in the beginning Salazar Sr in the undead dungeon did not recognize her at all and implied a close relationship to Rowena, this did not happen; you had Arthur die in the DoM but he appeared later in an Order meeting) the work you did with world building is amazing in this. The detail you apply to the magic system is phenomenal.

I do think you expanded the world a bit too much, though. I think the divine regalia plotline is a bit much for the HP story. Not so much the plot itself, but having it happen alongside the Voldy plot as well makes it feel like... a lot. That on top of the additions of Divine Magic, Primal Magic, Druidic Magic and the other extra magic systems make this very dense. Those details, while neat, feel kinda unnecessary. Those systems really havent come into play whenbit comes to the cannon plot and exploring them through Aubrey would take dozens of chapters.

Personally, my recommendation for when you do the rewrite is to cut most of them, and allocate the ones most like standard magic into sub-schools/fields of magic that are specialized

To elaborate, Shadow could be for infiltration and assassination, all elemental spells can fall under Primal, etc. Those all feel like classicla fantasy magic. However, divine, draconic, demonic etc magic being a different type of magic all together makes them feel like they dont fit in the setting. In a world that has abilities and magic granted to people through making pacts with greater beings is where they would fit better.

Along the same lines, I also feel like the stat numbers used might have gotten too high. I honestly can't remember where hers are currently at. I just kinda skim the numbers and skip to the perks. So, I would suggest limiting them to lower values and giving each point more weight... think like the Old School Runescape skill leveling applied to stats. Each level/point takes much longer to gain but they are worth more and once maxed, you just keep gaining xp infinitely in that skill or stat. The perks are far more interesting i think so more of a focus on that side, maybe there are more perks and these perks are what make everyone unique... its something to think on.

Potential missed plotline opportunities. You gave her the title of "Morgana" so her time rifts could have involved falling into the time where she attends Hogwarts, only for her to learn that in a past life she actually was Morgana. That would have created a really interesting plot where she learns her true history, why she was labled such a Dark Witch, whatever that reason may have been. Would have also made a real statement later on when she joined the Order and when she told Dumbledore.

I know I just through a bunch of what felt like judgy paragraphs. However, this story's MC is honestly one of my favorite MCs across fandoms and is my fav HP MC. Despite there being a few things i don't necessarily like. I love this story and definitely enjoyed my second read through

Keep updating so good pls update

yeah not liking where this is going at all, killing is wrong, everyone knows that but not being able to actually kill as a protector like her would be suicidally stupid for herself and everything she's trying to protect

I was going through old stories and realized how long it's been since this has had an update. It sucks because this is one of the better stories I've come across.

I am done.. I am sorry it's a delightful story but your main character is absurd

How pathetic is your character that even with all of her cheats and powerups she can't even beat the children she surrounds herself with despite what should be overwhelmingly superior EVERYTHING. And don't give me some bull on how their near prodigies nope, they do not put a tenth of her effort.

Look I'm going to try and not be an ass, but I have to ask do you even READ what you write? You have a character who despite obvious maturity refuses to use said maturity. Flitwick knows some of her secrets he could easily order the two annoying professors to leave her alone. Shes 600 plus years and stomps her feet acting childishly because adults who don't know she's 600 years old treat her like she is 12. God some of your story is so brilliant but the rest is absolute garbage. You literally started the story with her being told to entertain her patron if she wishes to continue to exist then entertain him but instead, she just waits for other people to do the hard work and then skips in and gets the spoils? she just constantly studies and ignores everyone around her, WHERE IS THE ENTERTAINMENT FOR HER PATRON? you make me want to punch my computer. do you half ass everything in life?

Oh fantastic, after the beginning of this chapter, I now can only picture your Dumbledore as being portrayed by JK Simmons. This is amazing and you have given me a unique gift.