Objektive survive

. . . wow. Crazy ride.

Thanks for sharing that!

Well done on completing the main story. Now Professor Harry "Obscurus" Potter has entered the seemingly vast endless post-game fun. There are two things I would like to see. Beyond what post game superbosses dream up and some university slice of life post-game chapters.

The first is Harry waging a prank war on the Daedric Princes to make them treat their worshipers better. While also schooling the Thalmor in why it's a bad idea to unmake reality.

The second is him meeting the One-Above-All and directly be given a time travel quest that sees him rewarded with a new game as the reward. Resulting in creating a good aligned, plane of wizardry chaos energy.

Finally, I would like your take. On how your Harry would react to finding a gay version of himself that also developed an obscurus. Which was contained by that universe's Sacrificial Protection powered Bond of Blood. Meaning it went undetected until Harry uses a ritual to turn Voldemort into an immortal draconic Djinn. This results in the universe's Harry using a tiny fraction of the usable magic he has left. To draw and activate a second ritual, in Dumbledor's office. That draws in ambient magic and grants him the magical strength needed to reformate his soulscape and the remains of his magical core. Causing his core to crystalise the segment of the spine that is in-between the hipbones. Given the right guidance and enough time he can absorb and synchronize interdimensional energies. Granting him access to said form of sorcery. Also, your Harry's multiversal curse did effect that universe's Umbridge. Mainly because the unchangeable Canonical HP universe temporarily shielded it.

You have a VERY twisted mind! Lovecraft, Young Frankenstein and The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy all in one chapter!? INSANE! I LOVE IT! YF is one of my favorite movies, especially the part about Frau Brocker. Loved that scene, hell I love almost all the scenes. It is a masterpiece!

I LOVE Lovecraft! I remember reading his works as a teenager, and yes, I did leave a light on at night. To me he is one of, if not the scariest horror pulp fiction writers, period. The Elder Gods, the residents of those old New England towns. Lordy. Just again thinking of his works means I may leave the lights on tonight. lol

I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.

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I've always considered an MOB aka dark wizard. Happy to see someone that agrees with me. But Harry as that DADA teacher, OH MY GOD! lol

Loved the last line. Good job

Insanity...all of it.

Defeated by kitty litter? That has to be THE MOST embarrassing way for a villain to be defeated. LMAO

Mary Jean Watson/Red Sonja? What a HOOT! If you can, you should get your hands on a Furry comic called Red Shetland which is a spoof of Red Sonja. It's a FUN read. It's from the 80's and has a very small print count, as did/do almost all anamorph comics (exception Teen Age Ninja Turtles) If I recall correctly their are about 8 or 9 issues before it faded away. I actually meet the writer/artist, Jim Groat back then and while he was a 'little' crazy he wasn't that bad. But he had a tendency to use people so I finally dropped him. Have no idea where he is now.

Are you trying to make me hurt myself? Nick Fury wearing an Afro wig! OMG! LOL Glad to see Coulson has a sense of humor, a poster sized copy, he will need to guard that with his LIFE! Lol

Oh Lord, I really look forward to Fury meeting Harry, I have no doubt it will be a hoot! By the way did you know that Nick Fury and his Howling Commandos were a comic from the 60's? Set in WWII, there was Dum Dum, his red haired corporal and a host of others, I wish I had kept those comics. They were great reading for a kid, and beat the still would be

I love it, THIS IS GRINGOTTS brought back memories of, to me, a most excellent film. I loved it when he kicked those Persian a-holes into the pit. It fits.

You've always got a line that makes me laugh in every chapter, I swear. That last line about breaking Stark before he returned to the states just made me snort. Lol