Little bitch that always causes problems because she thinks she knows best in the cartoon. Now she cries after not getting her way and finding out that to get powerfull she might actually have to put in some effort and not just touch one of twelve magic rocks. And instead of talking to her about her childish ways and trying to have her mature and grow as a person he kisses her... Fucking Cringe Don't even get me started on how he and the Ancient one just left the Pyramid up in space.

cringe

so much cringe... don't like jade

Ahh, now I remember why this story started to fail... It all started here with the introduction of Jade.

Okay. First of all, I'm going to admit that I've become a fan.
It took me about a month to finish reading this story and this is the first and last time I am going to write a review, because the curiosity to read further was more than the admiration for your skills as a writer.
Honestly, I've always admired writers who can play around loopholes left in the factual data available. You've taken it to a whole different level. I started reading this expecting a Harry Potter and Avengers crossover. The Avengers didn't even make an appearance till chapter 71/72. That was a huge gamble you took and what a return it gave.
If anyone ever asks me what I think of you, I'll tell them that you are a maniac. I mean, who in their right minds would insert Jade Chan into a Harry Potter - Avengers crossover.
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Thanks for writing a masterpiece.

All this explaining how his ''fake powers'' work is getting annoying since all the readers know it's pointless anyway.

Useless ''fake'' powers. this all feels way too forced

Ah, the nerf. 1st have him ''mix his energies'' to nerf him, then make him have fake mutant powers so that even if he isnt nerfed, he actually is, because all we will see is his made up powers.

You do know that no one speaks Arabic in Afghanistan right?

You know, it’s kinda getting annoying the lengths that Harry keeps going through to hide his power. I get that he doesn’t want to attract enemies, but it’s not like he shows all of his abilities. He never does. And it’s really getting ridiculous.

Of course, there is always a time and place for arson.

Will Harry ever meet Deadpool? I think they’d get along ver nicely.

I literally saw the whole romance coming since the moment Harry got the idea of a 100 year vacation.

Please, please, PLEASEEEE stop writing “nah” as “naw” it’s not “naw”

Why is there such a huge gap between STR and the other traits? It’s been emphasized that he practices increasing the most yet the gap is just gettng bigger…