Reviews for Harry Potter the Mutant Obscurus Gamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() “About treefiddy”, hey! I understood that reference! |
![]() ![]() ![]() After 16 chapters Harry has seemingly god like powers. That is an issue with the Gamer fics I have read. Thank you for the entertaining read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thru 13 chapters the fic is entertaining. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After reading 8 chapter I have to ask, how big is his inventory? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear god… did he just prevent the fantastic four?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That would definitely be an interesting pairing lol. The boy scout and the cold blooded businesswoman. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am genuinely curious: is there a story related reason that you chose to repeatedly explain how things work, despite having explained it before? I've found it is better to not assume your readers can't remember important info. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was written before Jujutsu Kaisen came out, but Mental Infinity sounds a lot like Gojo's Infinite Void. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry Potter Solo Leveling in the Marvel Multiverse. I like it. |
![]() ![]() Hell yeah! I was about to be disappointed that the story was over and then Harry meets some sorcerers and then I checked the chapter count. THERE IS STILL SO MUCH MORE TO GOO! I'm super excited to read the rest of this! |
![]() ![]() Hahaha! That last bit was GREAT! At least this tells us that Harry is in for a rough time. Poor guy. Lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAHAhahahahaha his sex path is the highest path that he has |
![]() ![]() Awesome GOOSE! Sorry Hedwig, but a space cat thing is much better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall a very well done story. Loved how you integrated the various magics and powers together into something cohesive. I think the biggest stumbling block was the introduction of dimension hopping. It sort of interrupted the flow that you'd built up with the Marvel characters. Then returning back to the main universe and finalizing everything in a couple of chapters came off as super rushed. I think if you'd put all of the non-critical dimension hops into a separate side story and just focused on Harry acquiring tech from elsewhere, along with ~1-3 more chapters of build up for Hela and everything would've been perfect. But overall this is a relatively minor complaint and the whole work is pretty solid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy OP and Godlike Harry but has been so prevalent in the story i have to stop and go read something else. I dont know how this story can be so long when he’s already so powerful. |