Reviews for Harry Potter the Mutant Obscurus Gamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Overall a very well done story. Loved how you integrated the various magics and powers together into something cohesive. I think the biggest stumbling block was the introduction of dimension hopping. It sort of interrupted the flow that you'd built up with the Marvel characters. Then returning back to the main universe and finalizing everything in a couple of chapters came off as super rushed. I think if you'd put all of the non-critical dimension hops into a separate side story and just focused on Harry acquiring tech from elsewhere, along with ~1-3 more chapters of build up for Hela and everything would've been perfect. But overall this is a relatively minor complaint and the whole work is pretty solid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy OP and Godlike Harry but has been so prevalent in the story i have to stop and go read something else. I dont know how this story can be so long when he’s already so powerful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i had a laughing fit after reading this chapter and as always you do great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Therapy… lots and lots of therapy is what Harry needs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hey Goose. I'm going to get ambushed tomorrow by parties unknown and likely kidnapped. Want to come?" The orange tabby cat shaped Flerken lazily looked over to Harry and conveyed, 'Might as well. I have been getting bored lately.' The best way to get your pets some exercise! Plus, how bored do you have to be to want to tag along for a kidnapping? |
![]() ![]() ![]() im glad that there is not smutty scenes in this. i already dont like harem. its only for the plot that im reading this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am already dreading harem. I think the story would be better without it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() M.O.G Master of Games |
![]() ![]() i'm impressed by the range the radio controlled drones have considering he is "several hundred miles" away and yes that was sarcasm |
![]() ![]() if magic influences how grenades work that means magic influences chemistry in which case all life touched by magic would die since life is all about chemistry |
![]() ![]() I have been waiting a long while, so will you be posting chapters about Harry exploring various universes or will this fic not get any more updates? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. i reread it every once in a while to remind myself how much i like it. hope you continue to post soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its a good story but it doesnt feel complete, its such a sudden end and i feel more could have happened |
![]() ![]() This story literally gets dumber with every chapter |
![]() ![]() Why didn't you age up Harry a bit an 11 year old doing all of this is kinda nonsense |