Beautiful. 10/10 I can't wait for the next chapter.

A little jarring. A lot of info thrown in there but your core idea is solid. I am curious to see where you will take it all.

Jon isn’t going to be happy with Daario, maybe he’ll use a knife he gained from Ramsay Bolton on him.

These later chapters have really put me in a Love/Hate position with this story. I love the Jonerys and that Jon has actually embraced his Birthright. What I hate is that you have kept everything I hated about season 8 in this story. The thing I hated above all else was Arya getting the kill on the Night King when it should have gone to Jon. When that happened in season 8 I immediately said I would lose my shit if Arya got the Cersei kill as well and you went and did that here. Hell, you should probably have Arya rescue Daenerys as well because she can do everything. Maybe Jon can do a flyby on Rhaegal and airdrop the little Deus Ex Machina to single handedly rescue Daenerys and Missandei as well as kill Daario. In the end the Prince that was Promised prophecy was complete bullshit and Cersei was not killed by one of her brothers as was prophesized. My thoughts leading into season 8 was that if any other character besides Jon killed the Night King it would feel like getting to the final fight between Harry and Voldemort in Harry Potter only for some secondary character to one shot Voldemort completely out of the blue. Just forget about the prophecy or the fact that they're stories have been entwined together since the beginning.
Anywho, keep it up. I'm anxious to see Daenerys and Jon reunite and start their rule together.

as much as I always wanted to see Arya kill Cersei, it seemed a tad bit boring. It just happened so fast. There was No fighting, nothing. I was sort of hoping maybe the North and the Queen's armies would fight against the south while Arya killed Cersei. And than have her surrender. It just was a bit boring for me personally. But I still love this story

Definitely my least favorite chapter this far just because I hate how Daario has Dany dancing to his tune. I'm not a fan of such a powerful character like Dany possibly betraying her love for Jon if the situation gets that dire. I feel like she could get herself out of this situation pretty easily and if not it's a good thing Jon doesn't have to waste weeks worrying why she hasn't returned yet before looking for her. He just needs to get a message from Bran about what's happened. I bet Dany could get herself out of there and get help as well to return for Missendei. As a Queen Dany can't allow herself to be manipulated like this. So while I dislike this chapter at the moment as soon as I know what happens in the future I'll be able to look back at this chapter more fondly knowing what's going to happen. Keep it up!

What the flying fuck! DNy should just summon dragon in the fighting pits and burn that prick to ash. I did not like this chapter. I did not hostage Danny. To damsel in distressy

love it

I have liked the story so far. That being said this latest chapter was absolute rubbish.
How exactly would elephants even be of any use on fucking Dragonstone an island where the only access to the castle is a narrow stairway?

Attack king'landing

:-)

Another good chapter.

Curious on what Sansa will do

the northarn lords a not going to be happy

Eugh. This is an even worse experience than S7/S8. Gonna have to stop reading.