I am a 100% Ash & Misty shipper, and this was SO good! The ending was very Ash, too. know my review is probably years late, but I don't care. This was just too good to ignore!

viva le fluff!

Great fanfiction but hard to find. You should add the characters of ash and misty as tags.

that was great it is the best

You did great on this. I hope you do more in the future!

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That was a really good story thank you

You should make a part two to this story!

I loved this it was so passionate. 10/10

I freaking love this

What a good story that you have written which I feel is a good thing for the indivisuals in the saga.

I feel that this story is good.

This is a really good story. It is hard to find because I normally click on characters and there are no characters attached to this one because I assume when you posted it, it didn't have a character option.

However, back to the story. I really found it an enjoyable story that has Ash and Misty's playful nature with each other done well as appose to how they sometime come across as aggressive to each other. I really thought the picture was an interesting touch and something I would expect Misty to do.

I was surprised that Misty was naked in the bed and a while ago I might of thought it was unrealistic but as I have gotten older I tend to go to bed like that when it is summer so I guess I can believe it.

Misty and Ash's moment was very interesting to watch and it made me happy to see it being a fan of the two being together as I really am.

Brock talking to Ash about what happened wasn't a surprise to me because of how he has been a part of there lives for so long and how he would be the responsible one of the group.

I think it would of been funny to see Delia talk to Ash and Misty about there relationship because it would be kind of awkward for them but I am happy with what I have got in the story.

I really had a good time reading it. I appreciate you writing it.

Great story! Absolutely love it!

Soooo cute! I love this story!