great story do you still plan to do a sequel

I tried, I really did, but it's just an endless infodump with barely any progression. Who needs two pages explaining what Shape will do after switching from his potions teacher role, how exactly Hogwarts would sell their potions, where in Hogsmeade the shop would be placed, why it was available to rent, who would man it, how they found out who would man it, what's the background of the people they assigned to it - and that's just the ONE example! And there are numerous and various things they cover that way! I want to be immersed in the story to even start caring (if ever) about that stuff but I can't get to the story because of the endless infodump page after page after page after page!
Screw this, I'm going home.

This is a great story! Kudos!

A bit sad that Donny didn’t get freed though. Perhaps in the sequel?

I look forward to seeing where you take this

I enjoyed your take on a different hogwarts. Thanks for sharing.

Ah, I really would have liked to see that Ronald put in a lot of effort in this and landed in 31st place. That would've forced the biggest rant in Hogwarts in the last century or so. :-D

Nice that "Looney" Lovegood proved to be better than all her tormentors! Perhaps the bullying abates somewhat now. Further down: Oh, it's been taken care of already. Very good. If a fifteen year old girl can state that taking part in a dangerous event is almost like having friends then something is going badly wrong.

Teach Hermione what a great author has said about long-winded writing! "Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away." by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry. And see how she suddenly learns to write concisely.

I'm surprised that wizard-raised kids don't learn to write essays. After all, all their parents know the significance of essays at Hogwarts from their own time. Not just paid tutors.

Hello
I am starting this story and so far I really like it. I was pleasantly surprised by your choice of time travel, it is not often they (2 time travellers!) go back long but not so long in time… quite more used to a marauders long trip
I also appreciate, even if maybe a bit ooc, that older harry is so talkative, it satisfaies well my curiosity about why and how and when things happened beforehand.
I will continue reading.
Have a nice day

Thank you for your writing. This is a very nice story. I like your ideas to improve Hogwarts.

Still waiting for a sequel to this fantastic story

This story has a lot of good ideas in it. The language isn't the easiest to understand in places, but I would definitely recommend this story to anyone looking for something to read. Thank you for sharing this with us and I look forward to seeing what else you have written.

Using the ghosts for patrols is actually very smart and something I had never seen before

it's weird that he's telling her to question authorities and think for herself while she's questioning his methods as an authority.

Nice to see young Harry make more friends and branch out.

Hmm wonder what's gotten up Hermione's nose. It's not her teaming up & agreeing with Percy as they did in past-future since Percy is still in school.
And it's not the old fanfic fave of Hermione working/spying for Dumbles to hamstring Harry, as Dumbledore is rather nice here. Sure he has his manipulations but it's actually reasonable and not hostile.

Maybe it's the classic "I'm the best student, how dare you show me up by being top student/getting top grade!" snit Hermione gets into. And yes that's canon. There's at least 2 times she's done this. I think it's early in the series Neville got top spot in Herbology and Hermione refused to talk to him for rest of the day.
Then the one we all remember from 6th book when Harry used that potion book and was getting higher grades than Hermione, so she went b1tch mode.

You're welcome. This was a fantastic story that was also a joy to read and review.

I don't know if you have a sequel for this yet, but when you do I am going to read and review it!

*chuckles warmly* Chances are that I may already have and I just don't remember since it has been so long.

thank you for this story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!