I love this shit!

KICK FISHBOY'S BUTT GWEN!

Don't particularly agree with 12 year old percy suddenly being married like this. It makes the pairing feel forced despite the soft transition you're going for so far. Not a huge fan of the extent of the accelerated maturation so far. Both combined feels like you're cramming him into a hole you dug instead of letting his character run a bit more wild. Takes away from the baseline "origimal Percy's" personality a bit too abruptly. Part of that might be the addition of the pacing and writing style mixed in so far, and I can see some improvement as I read despite the numerous revisions and/or edits. Not great, but hasnt turned me away yet. Lets see how you take this further. At chapter 19 so far.

Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,

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Hope to hear from you soon

Exponentially increasing something is dangerous, because training 8 hours a day will result in 81 hours trained, then the experience equal to 82 trained, then 83, up to 87 on the last day of the week. This results in the equivalent of training for over two million hours, or over 273 years of nonstop training.

Finally caught up! Loved it all and in excited to see what happens. My favorite pairing is just like my favorite skyrim build… i always wanna try something new, but every time I have to root for some Pertemis.
Great writing and keep it up!

Fyi

Oh man, I have been invested in this story for a few days now, absolutely binging it the writinng is so good. I wasnt the biggest fan of the MJ pairing, but even still her death was a shock, and that last goodbye was so, so, so emotional. I damn near cried at three AM because of it. Anyways, now that im catching up i cant wait to join everyone else in waiting for these updates. Keep up the amazing writing!

I mean I kinda see what you're doin but honestly Percy/Thalia just hits different in this story. Also, what a bullshit justification for blasting him out of the chariot.

"I knew you'd be fine."

Sure, you did bitch.

sup brother, been a while, chaps nicely put together as always, but i have to say this is the first time I've actively disagreed with Percys reasoning behind his choice, hes making the same mistake he had before meeting God Percy, trying to cheat his way out of making himself better, durability was a highlight of that fight, with God Percy and Percy literally having a discussion about it and Percy agreeing with his reasoning, the second option was quite literally a word to word following of all of God percys advise, yet he goes against that completely and tries for a shortcut again despite his very recent revelations, hes being dumb here imo.

Just my observation, besides that the writings impeccable as always my friend, you've really gotten pretty damn good at emulating Uncle Ricks writing style while melding it with your own, so no critics there. You've only gotten better. Percy being so blasé with Artemis felt a bit off to me though, I figured he'd have a lot more of a passive aggressive bite to him at their next meeting then he exhibited.

You see thats the problem with writing Aphrodite, im 60% sure everything she told him is just a lie and she is infact just a whore, i could be wrong tho im pretty sure shes all bullshit.

honestly, one of the things i really dont understand about this fic is the author trying to 'develop' Aphrodite and Percys relationship.

1. Hes fucking 12,
2. Aphrodite will ALWAYS be a glorified whore, no matter how much you change her back story.

You basically admitted that you want to make this a Artemis x Percy so why?

Very good writing again

This was so good! looking forward to the next one.

Good to see you Maroon, Great chapter I can not wait for the next one!