Reviews for A Steel Heart Forged in Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good start to your story and love the starter it’s my favorite Pokémon hope to see an update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent descriptive writing. I like the subtle foreshadowing, it remind me of another fanfic but this one is much more polished and developed. And its always nice to see a fellow story about Brendan. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good first chapter! I like the small tension between Brendan and his family, especially his Father. That'll definitely make for a good gym battle. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. Mistakes are minimal, at worst. Don’t know what that other guy’s talking about, saying you need to shorten your paragraphs. They’re a good length as they are, not too short or too long. Overall, good job! Can’t wait to see more! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter but I think you should make the paragraphs smaller so it doesn't look like a wall of text also you should get a beta reader to check spelling mistakes but otherwise it's great hope to see more. |