Reviews for Brockton's Celestial Forge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter, thanks for your hard work |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's super interesting how Endgame solutions are being considered for a problem that for a lot of worm fics is relatively minor. It's definitely a unique story. Love your work. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow sabah is really unlikeable here. Overthinking herself into being the victim. Well written and infuriating |
![]() ![]() InfinityMask: Ha the entire Celestial Forge fighting S9 would be like using a nuke on an ant hill, at most it would be just Apeiron with Survey monitoring everything to make sure nobody escape alive or anyone else try get in the way, perhaps having Fleet on standby in case any of the S9 almost escaped. Piggot and the PRT probably would have heart attacks upon hearing the destruction of S9 by the hand of Apeiron while online PHO is having a field day with this and Apeiron and the Celestial Forge get a much bigger fanbase. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Taylor! Don’t cut down the historic buildings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . . .well fuck, Victor is dead. His stupidity, arrogance, and envy is going to get him killed. 'In order to obtain anything, something of equal value must first be given'. That is Alchemy's Law of Equivalent Exchange, the absolute most basic law that anyone NOT named Apeiron can simply ignore like a mere suggestion than an immutable law of nature. He just stole the bare-bones basics of the bare-bones basics of alchemy from Aisha with none of the warnings and rules that govern its operation to prevent such stupidity as human transmutation. Hope he enjoys whatever knowledge he gets from Truth, and whatever punishment he gets for committing the ultimate taboo is worth it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, glad that Ashia actually had a handle before Brian stumbled onto that convo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo I have questions, what difference between interlude Brian and Interlude Grue? They’re same people. Hahaha. Anyway thx for the update and hope you get better. Hope Brian wouldn’t explode when CF fight 9. Lol! The Gym is right. He is cape! Tho I’m curious how no one in gym connected him with Apeiron… |
![]() ![]() Well Brian has a lot to think about. Wonder what will happen next now that Brian’s mini arc is done, is Joe going focus on S9? I wonder if Apeiron is going be seen in public eye more often because the PRT wouldn’t dare to try anything against him no matter how much Piggot would want to try something and anyone that try pull any crimes while he is nearby would have a heart attack upon seeing him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was not expecting that. Went full FMA. Never go full FMA |
![]() ![]() neat |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love PHO. There should be some rule that all worm fanfics should have a minimum of at least 10% PHO chapters. It's so interesting to get the perspective of civilians and how they interact with capes. |