Looking forward to the rest of the school year, hope Sirius stays safe, the find out about the horcruxes and get the one out of Harry door . Like they went behind the puppet masters back.

I like responsible Sirius asking David for help, glad he goes to the grangers rather than the Weasleys. You better not kill off Sirius in this story.

I mostly like this story, there’s a few bits like pulling the mirror out of her purse, that would come out of her handbag. Minerva shouldn’t be buying Harry a birthday present unless she is going to buy all of her hoses presents for their birthdays.

Bk

This is really great.

Another stellar effort! Bravo!

Into Favorites you go. Off, now. Shoo, go on.

"the twins stubbornly asserted that The Weird Sisters were superior. It was a shit opinion but they were welcome to it."

Okay but I cackled. Sounds like me and my friends "uh youre entitled to terrible taste i guess" is something I've totally said over music

The first chapter was a nice short story, though I'm very glad the people who reviewed it when it was posted encouraged you to post more and that you did. Now as a new reader I hope to encourage you to start a new story detailing how the GIT's and friends destroy her. One possibility I could see would be Professor Filious subtlety goads Umbrage into making a comment in a very public place he can then challenge her over to a duel, no matter how she responds it is over for her.

Okay. This was beautiful. The very best version of Hermione’s parents ever. I love these people. And I love Hermione and Harry. This is a great story. I’d wait til the end to say thank you but I just loved this chapter so much. Thank you

This is really great. I've read a lot of Harry Potter stories and don't remember seeing one quite like this. Please continue!

Another one of your stories I just had to binge read. Sirius talking about his time with the Potters even got me tearing up a bit. Fantastic work as always - thanks for sharing!

Good writing! If you continue with a sequel, I for one, will be there to read it.
Not much interaction with Ron in this tale, but I can see which way the wind blows. If it gets worse, Neville would be an acceptable addition to the group of GIT's.

Good job getting Harry's head right.

He's having trouble with the keyboard layout? For the LETTERS? Did... he not use a typewriter before? I wouldn't have considered that angle, but considering the year, I think he'd at least have had experience with computers beforehand, depending on his age. Maybe not in his home, but when he went to get his medical degree. Probably limited there as well, for essays and the like. But then I don't really know the educational situation there back then.

And if it wasn't computers, I'd think that typed essays would have been a thing. And the qwerty layout was the typewriter layout. I can't see whatever computer he got using some obscure layout there either.

Although, he might also have issues typing with typewriters too.

Oasis is awful I’m with Hermione all the way! There were a lot of better bands at that time!