This story was phenomenal! I hope someday you choose to continue working on it!

OMG... this story so viscreally affected me! I haven't been this enthralled with a story is such a long time! (As you can see... I just couldn't stop... as soon as my voice reader would say the words "TO BE CONTIBUED", I was back on my browser window highlighting, copying, pasting, and hitting PLAY! I just COULD. NOT. STOP.) I'd apologize for not reviewing every single chapter, but I know myself... and I know I will be reading BOTH of these stories again (probably more than once), and I always leave more thoughtful reviews on my second runthrough.

I hope beyond hope that you're still around, still reading the reviews and love that you get on this story and that you're still out there somewhere thinking about the rest of this story and not giving up on the idea of ever finishing this. I am so aware how life gets in the way of our passions, and sometimes the passion itself can be like a slippery eel... difficult to grasp and hang onto. Just know that I have completely fallen in love with your writing, you still as a storyteller (HOLY SUSPENSE BATMAN!), and... your Edward. Sighhhhhh. The maturing mate bond over the course of these two stories was brilliantly done.

Also... can I just mention how ingenious I thought it was how you were able to write something completely new and yet still keep your story's events contained within the original canon framework? That was SO WELL DONE!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for sharing your stories with us and being a DAMNED GOOD STORYTELLER!

I really really hope you see this, and I hope beyond hope that you're still writing.

Thank you again!
Jo

OMG... this is diabolical. I don't think you could have thought up a more dastardly plan if you were the devil himself!

*covers eyes* but peeks and continues on to the next!
Jo

This story was the best one I’ve read so far… I hate to see it’s not finished. I hope one day you get the push to get back on it. You have a lot of fans waiting.

I didn't realize this wasn't finished! (That's on me, of course.) At least most of it is resolved, and what's here has been fantastic, really high quality and immediately one of my all time favorites. Love the exchange with Charlie - I always enjoy it when he gets some idea what's really going on, and Edward messing with him was fun. I'm glad they're all acknowledging that Edward has a bunch of trauma to work through.

Again, just loved this. Following in case there's ever more.

That was a fantastic chapter. Great balance of tension and resolution, love the comfort and trust between them, finally seeing them on the same page.

I should have been leaving way more comments on this, but I was up too late reading it. This is just brilliant, so well written, so well constructed. All the character motivations are right there to make even their extreme actions believable. This has taken so many of my favorite aspects of the books, especially the emotional intensity, and just amped them up in the best way.

Finish this fucking story, cunt

Fuck you, you fucked up freak Alice. Does the cunt get a kick out of watching Bella and Edward together?
Edward and Bella must separate from the bastard Carlisle, let yhe stupid fucker stay with Thomas and Bree.
Even Charlie Swan was a bitch and, like in every fucking story, he liked Jacob over Edward.
Well, this fucking story is incomplete.

I devoured this story. It may be the best Twilight fic I have ever read. It is amazingly well written and such a unique plot. You are very talented! I hope all is well with tour home life. I see its been a couple years since your last update. I favorited and followed this story and I hope you come back to it someday.

I ate this up! You did a great job at portraying an overly dominant and protective version of Edward. I really hope one day you return to this story. Followed and favourited!

Devoured this fic immediately after reading the first installment. I was hooked! You do a great job switching perspectives, and your characters feel very vivid. (Bella and Edward were frustrating at some points, but their flaws make them more real.) I hope you resume and complete the fic someday!

Sooo good, love the careful way you navigated both of thwir trauma and healing process while also keeping a good plot drive throughout, that it didnt hey tired. The cliffhanger left me anxiously waiting for the next part. I really hooe you continue the story some time soon!

Dark and so well-handled. Amazing. Thank you so much. I hope you continue one day. I'm rooting for you, and your story really gave something to me.

Oh I hope you continue this story! I keep rereading it hoping an update will magically appear. So good!