why does he not just remove the stargates from rebeling workds or worlds he list and go on about business. if they have no gates, they really dont have value for 3asy acess unless you have a ship, and it linits the rebellion in gsining new people.

cool story, but why did he let them get info on Atlantis. he should have gotten it, and why did he let them in on the zpm station. he could have loaded up on zpms...

Very inconsistent.

Really miss this story, cant believe its been over 3 years

ahhh but model Six is basically a goddess :D

im loving your story so far thank you

i love your story, but i truly wish someone would make a goa'uld story when the MC actually acts like a goa'uld, everyone always takes the help earth route, like why? they manage just fine on their own

Pretty okay. I do wish the MC didn't go blabbing his secrets to everyone who he thinks is from Earth. First and foremost, information as critical as you're not really what you say you are should stay between you and you. This is the kind of information that would have most of not all the other system lords turn on you, and potentially individuals within your own forces.

Not only for good security reasons, but it also allows easy drama and tension within the story. oOoOO why is this one so different. That kinda thing. Instead by the time any earth people meet him that's all gone. So as of chapter 5, the story is kinda going the way of x went here and did this and then developed that.

Always thought it didn't make sense for Teal'c to switch sides with a inferior force inside a prison, assuming the perks he had as First Prime of an intergalactic empire.

looking forward to the rest. be cool to see Ares interact in the Pegasus Galaxy.

A great uplift story though of gouald worlds which is a fun twist.
I enjoyed the series and I hope you finish it.

Thank you.

Wish this had been properly completed

He should rename Areya to Coruscant

loved it! very enjoyable! I'll look at any other stories you have!

Hatak based ships are pointless!