|Reviews for Poor Alan|
| polar.amity chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Aw, I like it. Stimata was a great movie. They would have been wise to do more movies on similar subjects. If it makes you happy you should finish this up. It's good so far.
Though, you may want to break up your paragraphs a bit more. When the page first loaded I saw a huge, daunting wall of text that nearly sent me packing. Just a tip.
| Xxwolfy-chanxX chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
o interesting do you plan on writing more cuz it is really good so far and i'd like to see what happens next so please upload more!
| Ardulin chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
I like what you have done so far but is there going to me any more? It seems a little unfinished and maybe just a little bit rushed - quite a lot happens in a single chapter! Hope to see more!
| Hulda chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
Hi i just want to know if there is supposed to be another chapter in this story or? Im just wondering.. could you e-mail me and tell me..if you have the time? my e-mail is .. thanks