Reviews for Innocence Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I hope Angela takes the news well, Paul deserves to be happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charlie is such an awesomen Dad! Fantastic chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay glad Charlie is ok with Rosalie and Bella dating. Can’t wait for the double date chapter. I think Angela will be fine with everything when Paul tells her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to reading more. Happy that Charlie knows and was cool about it. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved this chapter! I'm glad Charlie knows now, and Rosalie and Bella using the official title of "girlfriends" really made my night. Ive been excited all evening since I got the notification that you had posted another chapter and have been itching to get away from the family ever since lol. Also domestic Rosella is literally the cutest! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more! ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad to see this updated! |
![]() ![]() Pls keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() histoire impressionnante |
![]() ![]() Cute chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() carlise better not be too stuck up in Edward to realize it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a lovely chapter. Looking forward to further character and plot development. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How on earth can Carlisle STILL think Bella is Edward's mate after he was going to wait until the 'right' moment to save her? She still could have gotten hurt, and would be traumatized regardless. Aww, I liked Rosalie being a human drinking avenging angel. I always thought that suited her personality more than eating animals. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so glad this is updated, it's so good |