Reviews for Innocence Lost
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 12 . 12/5
bella is still very cannon imo
godric777 chapter 24 . 12/3
Nice but sad chapter, it should be interesting to see what happens next.
Wolf2468 chapter 24 . 12/2
please continue please update i really want to know what happens next
Kayozm chapter 16 . 11/26
Other people have probably mentioned this by now, but just in case… there’s part of a sentence missing in this chapter. It’s just after they get to the restaurant. It says “Rosalie and Paul at the waiter seating them stared at their mates.” And evidently something significant happened, because Bell appears traumatised afterwards, but exactly why is unclear.
ShadowCub chapter 24 . 11/26
Charlie was always going to come to a bad end, with the way Bella treated him not telling him anything.
catgrl chapter 24 . 11/26
Uh oh why didn’t Charlie have protection with some wolf’s. Bella is going to be upset if Charlie is dead. Hope for more soon.
Dawne chapter 23 . 11/5
You are a very good story teller. Please continue
Wolf2468 chapter 23 . 10/19
please continue please update
LeValken chapter 23 . 10/2
Loved it. Glad your still updating
evattude chapter 23 . 10/2
great chapter!
ShadowCub chapter 23 . 10/2
Oh shit.
catgrl chapter 23 . 10/2
Uh oh badness coming hope Bella and Charlie are kept safe. Aww Rosalie and Bella came out at school. Hope for more real soon.
Corr5092 chapter 23 . 10/2
hopefully they can stop this tracker and Edward
acetwolf94 chapter 22 . 10/2
Night Terror56 chapter 22 . 9/16
Loving the story still. Keep up the work.
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