Reviews for Significant Brain Damage |
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The Dark Sapphire chapter 9 . 2/16/2022 Damn that was brutal, but it's what Krell deserved. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 9 . 2/16/2022 This chapter, no, story, is a star wars nerd's wet dream. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 8 . 2/16/2022 I am stunned. Out of the dozens of star wars fanfics I've read this is the second one that has ever had Luke/Anakin actually use the force in a way in a meaninful way in battle. Real power that Disney scrapped in the EU. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 7 . 2/16/2022 Didn't we already go over the phase of adapting to a new Anakin. Why does this chapter feel like a reset? If you were going to have some big suspicion conversation you should have done it before this sudden 6 month time skip as it doesn't make sense now. On another note. We are finally seeing the affects all the changes so far are having on Obi Wan like you described in the summary of the story. I can also see how Luke being a lot like Qui Gon can stir up Kenobi's opinions and views since instead of suppressing them, he is focusing and being faced with more of his teachings and ideals. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 6 . 2/16/2022 "I did not expect them to send the jedi of old." Damn, that hit like a freight train. Also, I hope Luke remakes his lightsaber. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 5 . 2/16/2022 I absolutely love this interpretation of Luke. It's exactly how I saw him as a kid, innocent but wise, instead of how I do now. He truly is a New Hope in this story. With power surpassing every other, a genius mind and lovable personality mixed with a fresh outlook not just on the jedi, but the galaxy at large. Also, this stargazing fun just became a literal doomsday war council with Marshall commander Cody, Commander Wolffe, Captain rex, and and arc trooper. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 4 . 2/16/2022 Oof. Let the emotions get the better of him here. Luke has to learn that he can't judge people based on their future actions. Lots of good things on this chapter. Luke using his potential in a epic way. Everyone lives. And a wacky ending. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 3 . 2/16/2022 No muscle memory? I feel like you could have added a small montage over that month of training. It could even be a few sentences saying how Luke was combining old lessons with new ones and was learning even faster because of the muscle memory in the body. |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 3 . 2/16/2022 Where is Yoda? I feel like Anakin(Luke) would definitely want to learn from him and to learn of him. Plus, who better to train a jedi then one of the oldest and wisest in history? |
The Dark Sapphire chapter 1 . 2/16/2022 Curious how this would have gone if it was Luke from a few years later who was "chosen". Not sequel Luke but like Book of Boba Fett Luke or even Luke from say a few months after Return of the Jedi. |
Adult Shallot chapter 36 . 2/11/2022 This plot has become so convoluted |
Haku's Lover18 chapter 36 . 2/11/2022 I would have like to read the wedding. Bit this is good too. Please continue, Palps needs to die out of Leia and she needs her twins that Cody saw in the vision! Plus Ashoka and Luke! |
Fishgirl16 chapter 36 . 2/11/2022 Are you going to post again soon? |
maximusrexmundi chapter 36 . 2/7/2022 I always love a good fluff fest 3 |
skrapsynneh chapter 36 . 2/7/2022 Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more. |