I had to re-read this because I initially binge read all available chapters right before bed because I found this fic before sleeping. Therefore I missed a LOT of details.

But again I say this is a good fic.

Hmm. Great fic. Payment seems to have gotten over it and moved on a biiiiiiiiit too quickly. And Palpie's end happened out like taking the trash out from the kitchen to the garbage bin outside.

Fun fic regardless.

"Space is warped and time is bendable." Ha!

I started this on Friday. It has been hard to put down. Today is Sunday and I am all caught up. Wow! I have a lot of books to read. And things to watch that I did not know I needed to see. I am thoroughly hooked.

I really like the complexity of the story you have written. I have learned a lot about the greater Star Wars universe while reading. I like the way you have swapped and involved Anakin and Like's lives. The added depth caused by the Force dreams and the insanity of the other dimension works in a really strange and wiggly, timey whiney way.

As one dyslexic to another, you have done a pretty decent job at keeping out the mixed words dyslexia can cause. And anyone who complains can try writing themselves.

Great job. Thank you for sharing!

This is the Way.

AN: Thoughts, reactions, flightless birds of prey, or feedback, please?

Okay so I already gave you my penguin but have you ever heard of the Moa? It’s an extinct 3m tall flightless bird of prey that was killed off by the Maori. Interestingly, the stories about the Moa taking naughty children lasted almost a thousand years longer than the birds did.

Zillo beast for chancellor!

Oh boy, have I got a penguin for you.

Look up ‘depressed herzog penguin’ and watch the video. Personally I think that penguin is on a journey of discovery.

Damn this is so well written.

This has been a throughly enjoyable story. I look forwards to reading more of your work.

Really great story, I'm hoping you get back to this sometime soon! I feel like the last few chapters piled on the alternate antagonists a bit fast (first Palpatine for 25 odd chapters and the Abeloth and Plagueis is quick succession, I'm kind of waiting for the Yuzan Bong to show up), but at this point its not so much about the military victory or balancing the Force as making sense of their new, confusing family. Kudos!

I love it! Great turns, and twists, and very nicely crafted chapter!

Heartbreaking, beautiful, and well written.

This is amazing. One of the flaws I always saw and continue to see in time travel stories is people not warning others, not acting, as quickly, as surely, as they could. Seeing Luke do that, here and now, in this fic, really means... well, it feels right.

Stickers are always the best.