This is really cool. I am enjoying the Luke as Anakin situation a greater deal.

Very interesting story.

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This story started off, really good. I ate up the first like 15-20 chapters, but then things just kind of felt like they were going down hill. Around when Luke was transported back into his own body.
The biggest problem is the amount of telling and not showing, which is the problem with a lot of these following things:
Leia’s character isn’t very likeable in the fic. She doesn’t have a ‘Save the cat’ moment to establish her as a good person. Instead we are supposed to like her from the movies. It doesn’t help that the first thing she does is try to murder a man for crimes he hasn’t even done, which is not justified.
Speaking of Anakin I feel like you are bashing his character too hard. One specific example is people in the temple being surprised that Anakin was nice to them? We see him be nice and compassionate to others multiple times in the clone wars.
The action scenes, or lack there of. This story was never going to be an action heavy story, obviously, but it needs more than this. In the beginning it was a little slow, but now? It doesn’t help that you are constantly telling us about all these cool things like mandalorians attacking the Hutts. Also, now this is probably unpopular, just because an action scene is more ‘realistic’ doesn’t mean it’s better. Having characters just do one thing and then winning the fight is a bit boring. Especially when compared to the extravagant lightsaber duels of the prequels.
The antagonists feel a bit boring now too. I would much rather have the whole thing against Palpatine than this ‘Mother’ person, who it feels like you just tossed in (and then old Sheev’s master) because the characters are too overpowered and need an actual threat.
Finally is the butchering of a couple of the planet names and other names for in universe stuff. (Yes I know it’s rather ironic that I probably have a bunch of spelling mistakes in this, but I wrote this from an IPhone)
I really like it before chapter 15-20 and then all of these things (besides the spelling) just kept stacking up

Can't understand why people keep ragging on stories like this, it's AU! Obviously, there's going to be stuff you don't like...just ignore it or stop reading...it's what I do. I choose to enjoy a writer's creativity instead...it's always interesting to see alternate choices play out with the author trying to create a new "worthy" timeline...I myself don't like Padme giving up on Anakin so soon but I know that rebounded relationships especially formed during confusion and misunderstandings never last... Good luck finishing the story...can't wait for your next update!

That one guest review is fucking hilarious. This fic ruined Star Wars for him? Bit of an overreaction, don't ya think lol.

Yeah, I'd cry too.

great going, thanks and keep it up, your stories are an inspiration :) :) :)

Dafuk! that got me floored

I love when authors do to the canon timeline/events what luke did to the death star

this story is OOC and it sucks offense meant

This is absolute awesomeness

I love this story! I’ve read it over the past few days and just love this time travel concept that brings Luke and Leia into the past but keeps them who they are. I look forward to see where you go with this story and hope to read the next chapter soon!

8/10
This is a pretty good story. There are some things I wouldn't have written and some improvements in spelling that can be made, but its your story and you can write it however you want. I'm not sure why people are so butthurt over Padme and Anakin breaking up, because, from her POV, Anakin was dead and his body taken over by Luke, who isn't about to fuck his mom. If you don't like it don't read it.

Murderer, Scum, and trash...thats what Luke is and you by extension.