Reviews for Significant Brain Damage
Manatheron chapter 33 . 3/17/2021
Finally caught up, and I've got to say I'm really enjoying this! Do you plan on including any of the secrets of Mount Tanis? I'll be honest most of what I know of the Star wars universe comes from either the movies or fanfiction, but that actually makes it better for me in some ways because everything is fresh and new no matter how I look at it, and I have no preconceived notions as to how people are supposed to act or react.

You spin a wonderful yarn, and I've been enjoying all of your stories so far. My wife seems to be enjoying them as well, and we're both looking forward to the next chapters of pretty much all of your stories. (I can't say all because I haven't read them all yet)

~Ben
Flametusk chapter 33 . 3/15/2021
I do quite enjoy how things are turning out.

I do look forward to seeing how the rest of what remains unwritten of Darth Plagueis's tragedy, and what it means for the future of the Skywalkers.
PhantomPie chapter 33 . 3/15/2021
thought my feed was oddly quiet, turned out i forgot to follow this story lol. at least it gave me multiple chapters to catch up on. great work as always! out of all the SW fics I've read, your writing style is one of the most appealing to me, idk exactly why. btw the kenobi scandal nearly single-handedly made me ship ahsoka and luke (in time travel) so I'm very happy to see them getting close in this story too :D

also rip palpatine, but we all know he deserved it lol
T chapter 33 . 3/12/2021
Good chapter. I hope the plagueis is killed and doesn't succeed.
Leraiv Snape chapter 33 . 3/13/2021
This has been very enjoyable so far. Thank you for another excellent tale. I love how different Luke and Anakin are in the Force, and the changes Luke has made by virtue of his knowledge and being himself.

I do hope Padmé returns to Anakin. Not because I object to a little girl-on-girl action, but because I think your matured Anakin would make a much better partner for Padmé than Lucas’ overgrown child. And because he never actually left her himself.

I look forward to an update!
Sw-0608 chapter 33 . 3/12/2021
Very good chapter. I enjoyed seeing Anakin make peace with 'his girls' and the party scene was very amusing and enjoyable. However, the plot's still thickening with 'the Mother' and Plageuis (sp?) so there's more to look forward to. Keep up the good work!
mc.zero chapter 33 . 3/12/2021
it was ok i guess, tho it was kind of ambiguous if this was the final chapter or there will be more... plaguesis did claim he'd go into hiding and wait for the next generation after all. Meanwhile, the Kenobi-Skywalker's were just doing fluff n stuff.
HorusRa chapter 33 . 3/11/2021
Please tell me. This is not the End, that You have a sequel somewhere in your mind
Mia R chapter 33 . 3/8/2021
Your note made me leave a review! I'm usually a ''stealthy'' reader in that I don't usually leave reviews because most of the time I just don't know what to say except a ''nice work!'' and other platitudes. I've been really enjoying your fic and following it with every chapter that comes along ever since its beginning (I think I started reading it when it had like 4-5 chapters?). I love your work and the concept behind it, your writing is appreciated - it's probably that most people, just like me, don't know how to give out praise properly lol
LuciTheFangirl chapter 33 . 3/9/2021
This was a heart warming chapter, thank you for writing
Courtesy Trefflin chapter 33 . 3/8/2021
Well, I must say that I wondered if Plagueis ended up in the body which the Mother had been inhabiting. This is going to be very interesting, especially since no one has any idea who he really is. Wow. If you planned this from the beginning, I have to say, you did an awesome job bringing the story to this point! I’m impressed. Plagueis has just obtained all the power he’s ever wanted, and that is bad news for the galaxy, because he could easily wait a century or three when all the current Jedi are dead to make his move. I not at all surprised that Anakin is trying to be happy for his family but failing miserably. It will be nice to see him and Leia bonding more in the future. I’m so happy they’re becoming closer. I really loved this chapter! :D
Guest chapter 33 . 3/8/2021
Good one, some nice fluff to breathe easy.
And hope that poor Anakin can get a happier future
Courtesy Trefflin chapter 32 . 3/8/2021
I love the dream sequences, to be honest. They’re interesting and make this story stand out when compared with others. I did not expect that Sidious would learn about the twins, and Leia, in particular. (Or maybe he found out earlier, and I forgot?) I’m not at all surprised that Rex and the other clones refused to listen to the Mother. They will always be loyal to their Jedi commanders who have treated them as being instead of disposable slaves. I wonder if they really did kill the Mother then… I am glad to see Plagueis show up, because he’s an awesome super villain, and a definite improvement from Sidious being the main villain in everything. Lol. I loved this chapter so much! :D
BeautifulArbiterDreamland chapter 33 . 3/8/2021
This chapter feels like the calm before the storm. It was good, yet I know that it won’t be easy for them.
phineasn chapter 33 . 3/7/2021
I really enjoy your work. Sorry for not reviewing. Some of us don’t have the ability to express ourselves well and comfortably by writing.
Not only the ideas are hard to present in an orderly form, but also the writing itself is very slow and laborious.
I understand as a writer it’s hard to understand why people don’t just push out a long review whenever they read... it’s not so easy.
Im really getting hooked on the Plaguéis angle...
Thanks!
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