Thank you for an enjoyable story with many unexpected turns. Sacrificing their force sensitivity to prevent the Mortis demi-gods from ever returning was inspired. While Leia slaying Jabba will always be awesome. Thank you for sharing this story with us.

Glad to see Sheev gone for good.

The coronation was delightful with several relationship bridges being built.

I think I am as confused as the clones.

Bail and Breha accepting both Leia and Luke into the family was a heartwarming touch.

Despite the Anakin angst which usually frustrates me, I am actually proud of him for doing the mature thing and letting Padme go.

Relieved they learned about the chips without anyone (especially Fives) dying. Obi-Wan is right, those chips are a horrible violation.

That was brutal. Also an excellent portrayal of someone experiencing a flashback to a post traumatic event.

I’m glad to see the Son and Daughter dealt with, but I am more than a bit concerned with Leia’s behavior. There is a line between cunning and ruthless verses brutal and cruel which she seems all too eager to cross. I foresee much danger in their inevitable encounter with Anakin.

Obi-Wan and Anakin have been reunited, hooray! But Anakin almost immediately fell back into old habits, boo! Yes, the Son and Daughter are threats but Anakin is once again too caught up in his drama to listen to calmer minds.

You created an interesting dialog on what the force is and how to correctly use it. I also felt happy to see the Erso family safely relocated. However, my favorite part of this chapter was the clones reactions to Qui-Gon’s force ghost. Delightful!

Qui-Gon’s words were harsh, but necessary. Anakin watching the battle between Ahsoka and Darth Vader brought an interesting perspective. I doubt anything else would have convince Anakin to remain where he is.

You took Luke to a really dark place in this chapter, Rex too for that matter. I could feel his despair when he realized Obi-Wan hadn’t arrived with his fleet. The smart thing for Luke to do would be for Luke to go to Obi-Wan, but given his words to Rex I have a feeling he’s going to pull a crazy Ivan.

Bringing Bail into the dream/visions was an intriguing choice. He and Padme comparing notes while those around them debated the sanity of their beliefs was fun. But I really loved Satine fighting for herself and Korkie. Yes, Obi-Wan and the clones rescued her, but they would have arrived in time if she hadn’t put up a fight. The declaration at the end was a nice touch.

Anakin praying to have another dream of his children (one of whom hates him) is heartbreaking, but at least he and Obi-Wan were able to reconnect. It was nice to end the chapter on a high note.