Reviews for Significant Brain Damage
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
Ok he is having a breakdownand soon he will come to his senses and fix everything. I hope.

I did like the resolution of this small plot. Anakin played little in final episodes to this season, will you beskiing to next season or do some filler chapters. I would like to personally see him doing some study/training in some more advanced techniques that nether truly used or masterd. I would to see him learn , not going to try and spell the name, but to block, redirect, or dissipate force lightning and or blaster shots with his bare hands like Yoda does.
Murkglow chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
On the plus side, I liked Dooku's scene and Ahsoka is always a joy. On the negative, it kinda surprised me that Luke freaked out quite that badly to learning about his mother and such... I mean he had to know his mother existed at this time and given the ages of everyone/when he was due to be born he had to expect the possibility his father was already in a relationship with her (and that Luke himself was always going to break her heart). I mean I guess he just put it out of his mind and didn't think about it at all but still... Likewise, the fact that he and his sister were never going to be born, again seemed like a given he should have known the second he arrived in the past. Again, I'm sure he put it out of his mind but still, he had to know this already... I guess it just all came up suddenly and hurt him emotionally despite the obviousness of the situation.

If Luke needs to find himself a goal/anchor to keep going, I vote he grows attached to (romantically or not) and dedicated toward the betterment of Ahsoka. He's already noticed that he likes her personality and spirit, and he has already thought to himself that it was sad that she didn't survive the fall of the jedi order (even though she did, he just didn't know) so seeing it as a goal for him to help his father's former padawan grow into the person she was meant to be seems like a cool idea. Plus he has no existing history with her so that seems like something that would appeal to him at the moment given his recent breakdown.
gamer85 chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
liked it until the life crisis occurred
Chronic-Insomnia chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
Wow. Hope to hell he tells Padme. She won't want to hear Ani is gone, but the alternatives are so so much worse.
Guest Isa chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
Hmmm, hence no easy fix. Ah well. There's still time for that.

Yes, Luke was what Anakin could've been. Some of these guys need to check out the EU, Luke Skywalker becomes a beast. From essentially using the Force-equivalent of Ultra-Instinct to using 'Force Power of Friendship' to call upon the bonds he had with his NJO to strike down Abeloth, the Mortis "Mother" herself.

I'm gonna level with you point blank: I expect Ana-Luke to only get stronger from here on out.

Hoping to see Ana-Luke confront Krell.

Ana-Luke: Negotiator, the Second.

Indeed, Shmi saying 'there was no father', particularly after her hesitation...Well, it could've been because of DEEPLY personal 'reasons'.

Yes, yes, two Jedi/two Sith 'balance.' And yet the Jedi were forced into hiding while the Sith were allowed to blow up innocent worlds as they pleased.

'Screw the prophecy,' YES, please.

I'm waiting for Luke to question to himself regarding Ahsoka, Oh Force, did Vader kill this wonderful girl who probably reached out to him only to be violently rebuffed...?

YES, I was waiting to see Ana-Luke interact with Dooku, and I was NOT disappointed. Dooku's reasoning for going soft, at least to me, are completely viable. Jedi and Sith working together, such a schemer, that Darth Tyranus.

Ugh, angst. I suppose it would have had to happen sooner or later...But I trust it won't last.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

If I may, will Thrawn and "Anakin"'s meeting from the novel still happen?
Jack1nTheBox chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
that was a bit of an emotional rollercoaster. I like it though, this emotional breakdown was something I'd been expecting and even been looking forward to a little. it's good for his character development and after everything he found out something like this was almost inevitable. I love Padmé, but with Luke being who he is that heartbreak was something I had been expecting, though not really been looking forward to, I knew this scene was coming and I suspected something like this would happen but I sucks a bit so see a character as nice as Padmé be givin the short end of the stick. she deserved better.

but I think you handled this wonderfully, and though it sucks go her her hurt this opens up a place for Ahsoka as a possible romantic interest, I know the ages are different but I'm sure you can make it work.
Stevonnie-U chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
My heart breaks for him.
SvenTheDecoy chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
oh, but i frickin love this story.
SvenTheDecoy chapter 7 . 5/31/2020
jesus, way to end it on a high note. just another reason i never liked the way the council ran the order. secrets, mistrust, and their own fear led to their downfall. poetic, and highly depressing. i need a drink now
EternlDusk chapter 6 . 5/31/2020
This story is so good.
Sir Matthias chapter 6 . 5/29/2020
I must say that this is one of the best star wars fics I've read, I'm amazed with what you've done and I hope you continue this story to the very end.
Cottoncandyman chapter 6 . 5/28/2020
First fic I’ve read with Luke in it and it’s pretty fantastic. Read it all in a single sitting, was smiling just about the entire time. God I love time travel stories
StarlightBooks609 chapter 6 . 5/28/2020
Oh I love this story! It's really clever for Luke to pretend to have amnesia since he really doesn't know anything about that time in history, it allows him to approach things from a new perspective.
Also, I just enjoy everyone's reactions to a new and different Anakin. Can't wait til Luke meets his infant self, if Padme's still pregnant that is.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/28/2020
Really enjoy the clone perspective, in this chapter especially. The ideas in this story are very fun and I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
aswrkenobi chapter 6 . 5/28/2020
Honestly loving these chapters, I know there’s a lot of arcs people want you to explore but I personally would like to see the arc where I think it was tup, idk, whose chip malfunctioned and I think another arc that would challenge Anakin would be where Ahsoka gets framed. Other than that your writing is some of the best keep it up.
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