Reviews for Significant Brain Damage |
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lonestar40k chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 I wonder how Luke is going to come about without Padme |
PhoenixFireII chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 This was a wonderful chapter! I really liked the interactions with the Chancellor and the other Senators. I’m really looking forward to seeing where you continue to take this story. -PhoenixFireII |
StephanieStephanie chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 I really love the way Luke is making things lighter for everyone! |
edboy4926 chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 Awesome chapter. Okay, so Mortis is delayed, sad but understand. But looking at the S3 list, I just realized one potential game changer in episode 18 during the Citadel arc; how much is Luke going to withstand the idea to simply kill Tarkin right there. |
gamer85 chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 great chapter, looking forward to more |
ndjjdjsujsj chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 The only thing I don't like of this story so far is that I can't read more. |
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 3 . 5/21/2020 The messy room Anakin keeps is just another indicator of the part or parts of Anakin that is still a 9 year old thar refuses to grow up. You handled the meeting with Sidious just perfectly. I do not like him or how over powered star wars made him. But I do like the Lightsaber he used in episode 3 it just needs some different color blade. I like the shock Obi-Wan had at seeing the floating meditation. But should have done the controlled flip and decent that Rey did in episode 9, but the crash is pure Luke. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
SuperTroll567 chapter 2 . 5/21/2020 I only know the bare bone basics of Star Wars so I can't really say too much about it, but I do like the story so far. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2020 This good story. I like it. Keep writing good ples. Okay bye |
gamer85 chapter 2 . 5/20/2020 just read both chapters and looking forward to your next update |
Natman717 chapter 2 . 5/19/2020 Nice, well done. |
oldtimeydude chapter 2 . 5/19/2020 Ooh this is gonna be good! Now sre you gonna be incorporating Luke's opinions and philosophies about the Jedi training and force usage that he had from Legends? They pretty much put him at direct odds with the old Order in comparison. Not to mention that he figured intent was far more important in using force abilities rather than just labeling dark or light and leaving it at that. Or are you gonna be keeping him as effectively a blank slate for them to teach seeing as he never got to go through those decisions that would so impact his viewpoints on redemption and the other things? |
StephanieStephanie chapter 1 . 5/19/2020 Somehow the comments I wrote before don't show up right now. I hope it is only temporary because your story deserve better! |
theonlyhi chapter 2 . 5/19/2020 I enjoyed this story so far. I look forward to the next chapter |
mc.zero chapter 2 . 5/18/2020 still going good. can't wait for him to meet his mother, let's see how does he laughs at that |