Reviews for The Serpents Loss
Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's Master chapter 1 . 5/18/2020
Nice continuation of the previous story. Keep up the good work.
Pixie Duck chapter 1 . 5/18/2020
At least you're being honest THIS time and added the OC in the tags and said that he won't be going away.

I've dropped the first story because it was a blatant bait and not really story about Harry and Daphne, but your SI-OC and they Harry and Daphne were merely a side character. Which from what I've seen a large number of reviews agree with me on it.

You didn't mention anything about OC neither in the tags nor the summary in the first book and I guarantee that most people wouldn't have read it if you were honest about the story being about your SI-OC and with side characters featuring Daphne and Harry.

You should add OC tag to the other story and say that the story about him because as is, it's a bait for readers who wants Haphne, and I'm going to give the benefit of the doubt that it wasn't your intention.
astolfo83 chapter 1 . 5/18/2020
Glad it's up!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
burt1669 chapter 1 . 5/18/2020
Great to see the new story up! Imma wait till there’s a few more chapters till I start I’m looking forward to it!
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