Reviews for Dearest Cousin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() bella cursing at lucian when she doesn't need him then begging him to help when she needs something but won't ever respond otherwise. i hate bitches like her |
![]() ![]() ![]() filthy coven...wow as peacekeepers of their entire species. only fuckers like bella are trying to subvert laws that keep them ALL save. i feel like i can't read this fic despite the interesting premise because i just really want bella dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be been so nice if bella just got killed earlier. sigh |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() editniece not nephew |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, this is a great story! Just want to point out that if Renesmee is Bella's child and Bella is Lucian's cousin, then that would make Renesmee his nephew, not cousin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evolution go batshit crazy for a few minutes, that would be funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() happy Halloween eat all you candy and get that next chapter out! lol thank you for the update |
![]() ![]() I am really enjoying the letters that start the chapters. A good mystery is always nice. But as far as characterization goes, I would point out that limitations and weaknesses make characters far more interesting than powers do. Lucian is a little too overpowered. I think it would also help if there was a reason why Bella has always disliked Lucian. As it is now, I as a reader can't buy it, because it's obviously just a case of "let's make Bella look as bad as possible." |
![]() ![]() ![]() back to reread again! seriously this is the only si oc male and 3 kings book! and I want more! my life is so unfair |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the first book I've read when it's the kings with a male oc! I'm look forward to when they meet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful book please update soon can wait!️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it please post soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update! Im glad to see a little more plot is added. It was nice to see how he had good days and bad with bella, i like rose she my favorite :3. More of the kings will allways be appreciated! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much! This is actually the first time I commented on any story, but you deserve to know that this story is amazing. Looking forward to the next chapter. |