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![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is definitely my favorite fic by you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is it. This is the part where I die of cuteness overload. Ahhh I love this ship so much. I love how you write their characters so much. Seriously, it's amazing. I love Percy's introduction to Annabeth. It was so scuffed, yet it still somehow worked out lmfao. And the way he called her just a few hours after meeting, somehow managing to get a date, is just so... Percy. And then the date itself was literally so fluffy and cute and I loved every moment of it and then Luke was brought up and then Annabeth began telling the story of "Annabel" and my heart just went AHHHHHHHH then Percy left and a year passed and I kid you not, when Percy met Annabeth again in his mom's shop, I literally was smiling so hard. Then they got caught kissing LMAO. This fic was beautiful. Thank you so much for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWW THIS WAS TOOO CUTE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much loved it as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on Novel Star Mobile App. |
![]() ![]() This is amazing! I love reading your fics so so much, the way you write is just beautiful! The flea market scene is probably my favourite with percy admiring annabeth, it created such a vivid image in my head. I’m definitely doing a re-read of your fics over Christmas :) |
![]() ![]() I absolutely adored this! 3 your writing captures me every time. I really love reading your stories |
![]() ![]() This story was so cute! it totally brought a smile to my face. thank you for writing it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing. I loved it. It was so cute, fluffy and hilarious. Also, was this line a Dear Evan Hansen reference? If a tree falls in a forest and there’s nobody around, does it make a sound? Anyways, great one-shot. |
![]() ![]() im sobbing this is so good! |
![]() ![]() I loved this sooo much! I love your writing style! |
![]() ![]() Lol awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are such an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You know, all of your stories are just so beautifully written and described that I can't help but fall in love with Percy and Annabeth's characters. Again. And Again. And Again. "Paper soft and like a well thumbed book" - there are no words I, as a reader relate to more excpet probably that old book smell. Like pressed cloth and fresh grass and ink. "What are you?" "Interested in you" - smooth Percy! Honestly though, your stories always leave me on the edge of a total mental breakdown. At this point I'd rather want to get to know you than meet Rick Riordan. Lovely lovely story I've run out of words so I'll end with "My love for this story and the writing is like a wave born deep in the ocean that keeps on cresting" |