Reviews for Pursuing the Proposition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ROLF! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liam DID NOT JUST POST OR SEND THAT VIDEO SANTA CACHUCHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read many kisses and written some myself... that kissing scene was amazing so vivid I could see it playing in my head. Hope it doesn't mess everything up, I don't do well with angst. The clue was lost on me sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To quote Bella A part of me is completely and irrevocably in love with him... they're effed up for real. The night of the formal will change everything! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like I said dangerous territory... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think life jackets will save us...or them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These two are threading in dangerous waters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure no falling in love... like that's ever worked before. Let's start this recommended journey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love these 2 and this super fun story. I can’t wait to start tje sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was so much fun ans sweet. I'm actually surprised there wasn't any angst but I'm so relieved. I really needed something wholesome and this did it for me. I loved how you write Edward and bella's friendship and later relationship and I was laughing so much with some of the scenes between the boys. You really nailed their dynamic as well. I read the sequel and it really lived up to this. I definitely recommend for everyone to check the sequel out. it was such a nice addition to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this, what a way to make money! Can't wait to read the sequel. Oh and the manscape scene had me laughing so hard I was crying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved reading this story. This is one of those stories I see playing in my head whilst reading it. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That bit with Edward mowing his laan and Jasper helping had me rolling. Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() fun story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didnt write a review for any of the previous chapter thinking this will be a fun quick read. It's 1:10 am and I've lost my mind... Oh my goodness, I haven't laughed this hard in a very long time. The visual your words created as Edward is caught manscaping, then stammers his explanation to Jasper, had me dropping my tablet to wipe the river of tears flowing down my face. I can barely type through the watery view of my screen. Like mowing lawn, hahahaha You missed a spot...together fixing his look. Hahahaha Then add Emmett to the mix (knee slapping, bent over silent crying, drenched shirt from tears). I'm out... Hahahaha hahahaha ha hahahaha What, No boobs...Just stand here like a coat rack... hehehehe hahahaha Best all time chapter I've ever read! |