Reviews for Monochrome |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting few chapters please post again soon thanks! |
![]() ![]() Yeah... Defiance was much better than this... You really trying to overcomplicate things just for the sake of it. Defiance and Ragnarok are your best stories, but keep trying. |
![]() ![]() Oh boy, "animons!" Sounds just about as lame as "midi-chlorians." |
![]() ![]() So Harry wants other ppl to be able to use the powers of Death and Summer? The power of Summer I can sorta kinda understand but the power of Death? No, that makes little to no sense at all. Especially being the ambition of someone who earlier was questioning the power of the Sunken Vault being in the wrong hands. Now he wants ppl to have the power of Death? Your writing a great fic, but make sure your characters stay in character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Throwdown! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tx |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOWW Potter angry is not good for anyone who provoked that. Fucking awesome fanfiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOWWWWW! this is awesome. man i can't wait for next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() So damn good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy ultimatum time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally the showdown |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even with power drawn from the anima, if harry draws on the full strength of death, nothing should be able to stop him |
![]() ![]() ![]() About those animons,,to call them particles would imply the existence of souls as a form of matter and not some spiritual intangible thing like they are supposed to be in this story(I think). Of course this is a minor detail and the story will work just fine even if this is an inaccuracy, I didn’t even notice this until a few days after this chapter was uploaded. |