Reviews for The Boy Who Lived, The Brightest Witch and The Boy Who Wasn't |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Screw dumbledork and mrs Weasley |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this however, I am wondering how often do you plan on updating this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blacks arnt domestic is a crazy ass sentence out of context |
![]() ![]() ![]() Doesn't dumbledork or anyone realize that once he used Harry's blood that the blood wards become obsolete towards voldie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Bookmark. 4/15/2025 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, This was about as fun of a Umbrifge observes a class scene as I've read. Cheers, |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually belive the Charles and dorea grandparent pairing vs fleamont and europhia or whatever it is |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you have something especially horrible for the Toad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just that one little line about Alice in Wonderland says so much about Hermione's mom. Love that detail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapters! i really appreciated seeing hermione reaction to Umbridge. i think it is really true to her character also what a great date in hogsmead it looksperfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Thank you. Snowball |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that you’ve gotten up to 38 chapters, might I recommend that you include a synopsis of what has previously been covered at the start of your next chapter; especially since you go an extraordinarily long time between updates? |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one. The scene with Malfoy bullying them felt a little heavy handed but I really hope Harry will learn to ignore him. I’d like to see how fifth year would be different from canon because he’s a prefect (and of course, other event changes). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reread this whole story after the update and what a beautiful way to spend a few hours. Your characterisations and growth are so on point, your writing style is amazing and warm and wonderful (I am moderately jealous lmao). Anyway the new chapter is amazing and this house elf mystery is very intriguing- also Bathilda being part of the date is something I’ve never seen and never expected but it’s so quintessentially Harry and Hermione like wow just in awe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So absolutely adorable! So well written! And so really good! Looking forward to more! |