hermone was very wrong with the cat, and sorry but attacking someone for name calling hermoine was wrong on that as well.
ron was wrong for name calling.

i can tell this is a bash ron story leaveing out harry DID lie to ron he ask him why woudl someone put your name in and harry said i dont know, NOT to kill me.
and he yell at him about sirus sorry that was harry fault.

"Save, Harry, Snog Harry" is a great line.

I've read your story to this point and it's brilliant. Such a fresh take. Can't wait to see where you go (although I was hopeful Umb# ch wouldnt appear). Bravo. MNF

Yeah, eight

Nice. Great world building

Fantastic chapter, and I reread the whole story it was a great reminder of wonderful your story is. Thanks for the update

God, Slughorn was like a creepy pedio

Welcome to the real world,Hermione. Morons are everywhere

So happy to see Augusta put Molly in her place.

But it will take hexing to make me truly happy

No way Dumbles gives her the badge after what she did to Snape

Christ, someone needed to feed Molly some happy pills. Maybe she would have driven the children away

It’s so wrong how they didn’t brief the muggle parents

This frustrates me so much.

No one gained anything protecting the damn phrophecy. If your enemy can use something, eliminate the possibility of them of the having it

Love this story! Back when Hermione first rollicking after Snape, I actually anticipated chapter 36's ending, and that she might blame herself for Umbridge's arrival. Still, Umbridge is... inevitable. There are changes, such as Sirius teaching DADA instead of Umbridge, but that just leaves her more time to interfere with Hogwarts.