Reviews for Dreams & Premonitions
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 1 . 5/27/2020
Is there hope for Shinji deviating from what befell him?
ThreeNormal chapter 1 . 5/26/2020
Since this is your first actual fanfiction that you written, all I can say is the writing was practically perfect with some errors. The pacing in the last half of the chapter felt a bit rushed but wasn't an issue, and some minor grammar issues. I don't think I can give more advice without seeing more chapters. I think at chapter 3 I can give my full analysis amd proper advice. And finally, I'm very interested in the idea you're planning for this story.
Orcalalot chapter 1 . 5/26/2020
This is my first actual attempt of creating a fanfic. I'm still new to this whole Writing a story thing so If there is any advice or criticism you have please tell me so I can improve for the next few chapters. If there is any questions please do ask me. The next chapter will be up soon.
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