Reviews for Truth within the Trilogy |
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![]() ![]() this is sad, would it better to destroy Katase by giving that he's a traitor or atleast have Lelouch regress rather than resurrected and force him to take physical exercise i rather like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() However, I am still very appreciative that you took the time to fully complete this fanfiction. Your commentary is also very interesting to read, so I still very much enjoyed this. I just feel at some points you rushed the chapter, or didn’t understand the story or a character’s actions at certain points as the reflections were very out of character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish Journey of the Unholy Trinity could have been finished. Its a way better reaction fanfic that follows the anime instead and there's so much great reflection in there. |
![]() ![]() Good on you, for being one of the only people to complete these kind of fics, and i think it was alright. my issue with it is that you bash lelouch way too much, seeing as the audience are watching code geass from LELOUCH's perspective and HIS LIFE, and almost nobody in the audience are innocent by any means either. for instance, Cornelia was a merciless war criminal, like what the fuck? and yet she, and every other sinful character shown acts like a god damn saint every time lelouch pulls some underhanded tactics. mind you, the black knights are supposed to the the underdogs here. i was especially confused at the end of black rebellion/beginning of r2. audience has witnessed a WHOLE SEASON of lelouch's life, and yet nobody understands that he's a kid who's trying to save his kidnapped sister, and then ends up losing his memories. they just laugh at him for that and get pissed that he left japan alone. not even a fucking ounce of sympathy or empathy for him. Even from the britannians too lmfao. "fuck you, seventeen year old foreigner, for not prioritizing our conquered country during battle over your LITERAL SISTER BEING KIDNAPPED." What the FUCK? i literally had to double take at that chapter, because as I said before, literally half that room has committed sins of their own. which brings me to my next point. isnt the one of the main points of these kinds of fanfictions to show the character's hindsight? for the characters viewing to go: "ohh so thats why that happened", or "Ohhh, i get it now"? because what im seeing is every character in the audience being painted as a saint while also repeating the sentiments and opinions they had IN THE ORIGINAL SHOW. like What is the point of reading this if there's no hindsight? no reflection? the zero requiem doesn't count either. its pretty fucking easy to write every character as melancholy and regretful as possible. what's apparently not easy for you, is making it feel earned. it felt like nobody gave a shit about lelouch, THE MAIN CHARACTER for the entire story, and now, at the last minute, people start giving a shit? ugh. 4/10 i respect your effort, but watch the show again please |
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![]() ![]() You know, I always p***** off that in the cogiac movie, they didn't let jeremiah have his cool line onward masked night That line was so cool. Why did they have to take it away in the movie? It's like the most b***** line jeremiah ever says stare it toway |
![]() ![]() How stupid are the black knights sometimes like in your 's really chapter thirty one, like they can't use context in their brain to think, oh, he's lying to her 's very f****** obvious |
![]() ![]() Dear god ogi you're a c*** |
![]() ![]() My question is, has okie been gios to like hmm, like think, luche, is the bad guy like the thing the luche is the bad guy, he's totally geosed like, somehow he got giost |
![]() ![]() I think the characters are bringing is very stupid when they're all talking about the moral and capability of geoscies, someone, and then for Duluth, to kill them all in the first episode or 2, all the Imperial guardsmen. They were going to kill the loose. It was killed to be killed. There's no moral Condry in them there were sadistic piles of s*** and the loose was the kid guy he was gonna he was not a, he was just a normal everyday student. Yes, had revolutionary tendencies for he hadn't kidney wouldn't done anything against anyone. So him using his power to kill him and he said, well plus plus big plus he's a part of the royal family. And technically, if anyone ever found out that those guards killed a royal family member well, the whole line's dead, just by Cornelia, finding this out, no no no if you know who died in that episode found out that they killed his brother, lovable brother. No, they begin the whole line, we did them just can't lose killing just them, the adults. He's a mercy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm writing this before reading the final chapter. How beautifully written! You're the GOAT, not just for writing this, but for actually completing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehh, Lelouch and C.C got together though. At the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, i didn't meant canon timeline, i mean it suits well with the timeline in one of published anime (movie timeline). However in this one, Ohgi here resigned instead of doing his best as PM. IDK if Ohgi really trusted Schneizel or not in movie timeline, however in the end you made it all fits into movie timeline albeit some difference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this, so far this fic are the one that's more make sense with characters analysis to canon. Quite difficult to find due to not much character tags in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if Movie timeline Suzaku are the same with canon timeline, just a piece of information, in canon despite he was saddened by killing Lelouch, Suzaku still didn't forgive Lelouch (that birthday picture drama). But yeah, his reaction and musings in movie timeline are more tame than canon did. |