Reviews for The Surest Invisibility Cloak
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 4/20
Wow! Terrific idea.
Talk to the twins. Tell Bill and Arthur and the goblins.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 4/20
Grindenwald's daughter! Wow!
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 4/20
Will he help?
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 4/20
Well played, Harry and Ron.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/1
Grindelwald is not coming over as evil incarnate though Dumbles is pretty bad, at least as reported. Wouldn't an evil wizard have bitten the girl, resented being in a non magical house, and not felt gratitude (and lets not forget hermione's apparent conception)? Or do you plan for him not to be evil? Another intriguing story. i wonder if harry and G will team up against V... Thanks for sharing your story.
Goose chapter 1 . 12/21/2020
"Not a cliche-fic"

Proceeds to use the biggest, dumbest cliche in HP fandom. Jesus christ.
Patriot the wonder cub chapter 4 . 11/11/2020
Please update
lipasnape chapter 4 . 11/10/2020
The setting of the scene of future crimes is great. Now, what happens?
I hope you are well and planning to continue this story.
jumping-jo chapter 4 . 9/7/2020
ron being his friend still is brilliant, hermione being evil and gullets daughter awesome, and gallery escaping how wonderful
SMantis chapter 1 . 9/6/2020
Was it that difficult to at least write an honest summary? The love potion plot has been a cliche since the release of Half-Blood Prince and hasn't gotten any less stupid since then. The same is of course true for most of the other plot elements here.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27/2020
I like this story, more Harry please?
Calmzone1 chapter 4 . 8/19/2020
Great start. :)
stevem1 chapter 4 . 8/11/2020
This is a great idea of a story. A lot of it is well done.

There are some typos, nothing major. There are some confusing bits. Hermione being Grindelwald’s daughter via rape makes no sense. She was born in 1979, Grindelwald would have been in jail 30 years by that point. Ron being a secret friend to Harry is head scratching due to Hermione and Dumbledore’s legilimency.

Anyway, I like the story and will follow it.
fraewyn chapter 4 . 7/30/2020
Love it!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/30/2020
More Harry? Please?
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