This is a worse messed up timeline for giving Cinder Fall major boost. She's way more prideful and arrogant of having two Maiden magic at her disposal.

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This story deviated in such an interesting way! I LOVE when a character is introduced into a world and the overall dynamics of everyone involved change in ways that are unexpected!

Neos friendships and relationships with everyone is so refreshing and different Im excited how everything continues to shift in unexpected ways!

Finally. Not gonna lie .I thought fucking Salem was gonna show up at last to steal her subordinates away.

thank you for the update

I'm sorry but a system that talks back is so unbearably cringe. Like, its just not funny, at all. I've read dozens with this and this is one of the most annoying tropes ever. The bearable ones are those that only say shit in the status descriptions and nothing else. Sorry but this is just a pet peeve of mine so I'll just drop this fic.

Im on it

I find numbers like an excel sheet. Just give him the message and the rank of ability. What is the end point?

thank you for the chapter!

good chapter x31

thanks

good chapter x29

good chapter x28

The game system is very … intrusive in this story.

You have killed on of the Five Elder Stars.