I came across your story when looking for another earlier today. I have read Harry Potter fanfiction since deathly hallows first published. I’ve read all mmanners of stories from manipulative Dumbledore stories to independent Harry stories to redos- you name it. I’ve read it, well except Harry/Draco stories I don’t get those.

This is one of the most creative and unique variations I have ever seen. You have taken JKR’s story and added beautiful depth and realism and twists to her wonderful creation. Very few fanfiction authors have done as beautifully that I’ve read. I love how you’ve added a depth to the world and this whole other Dimension to it. I can’t wait to keep reading, but I had to complement your writing..

I think that Rons endless appetite is either a result of pressure to get enough food at the
family table or an undiagnosed medical condition ie. thyroid or in his brain...

Hope this story will be continued. Certainly enjoying it

I’ve been reading this for the past several years as it gets updated and I cant wait to see what happens next. Heres hoping its not abandoned.

Great story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I very rarely comment here. But this might be the best fic i read by far. The world building is astoundingly subtle and precise. Everything just falls into its place. And i just love the relationship that is developing between harry and hermoine. Please for my sanitys sake. Update please.

Your story is unique, the setting fantastic, chapters are Wonderfully huge... But a ñx 6mo delay is just cruel!

That horse scene reminded me about a horse I rode once.

She was dyslexic. No, seriously. Maybe dyslexic isn't the exact word, but she couldn't tell tye difference between pressure on the left or right. She just knew there was some kind of pressure on one side but not the other, and she should turn. And she just guessed where you wanted to go.

The thing was, she compensated in other ways. If you, the rider knew what you were doing. For me, she turned the wrong way 50% of the time, and absolutely refused to gallop. Because she read your emotions instead. When I fixed my riding anxiety, she moved exactly how I wanted with minimal instruction.

My riding instructor even did an experiment with us. Where I gave her no instruction at all, and placed various printed photos around the enclosure. For the most part, she moved to whichever photo I wanted... except for two. She refused to approach a picture of a bad memory of mine, and was absolutely obsessed with a picture of the Eiffel Tower, something I was pretty obsessed with myself.

Anyway, TL;DR if you get to know a horse like a friend, they can get better instructions from your emotions than your body. But yeah, if you're just a random rider, you need to know how to direct them manually.

I started this story some time ago and stopped reading as the sweep was wide and a long way from cannon. But I have now read to the end of what has been written and the wide sweep is coming together. Quite the epic. Not been updated for a while. I hope it hav not been abandoned.

This story is incredibly well written. Love everything about it. I hope it will continue. I love the thought of another world coexisting. This is really well thought through. You are very talented. This is right beside the Harry Crow story, that has been my favourite FF so far, but you’re surpassing it. Thank you for writing that.

To this review from frozenhacker136:

'Eagle of Ravenclaw? Its raven of Ravenclaw'

No, that's fanon. The canon house-animal for Ravenclaw is an eagle. The name could be in reference to the dark claws of the eagle, rather than a raven bird.

Had to step back for a reread. Very much enjoying this story. Exceedingly creative. I'm still a little off put by the amount of anger the characters all seem to have. But overall great characterizations and very entertaining. Looking forward to the next installment

I enjoy your writing style, just spent the past week reading your story and I look forward to the next chapter

Why did he have to die?

Eagle of Ravenclaw? Its raven of Ravenclaw