Why is Da Vinci suddenly French. Da Vinci is Italian.

Where has this fic been all my life...

You know what? I would love to see Scathach and Slayer you know "AAAAAAA~~~~~~" in private.

PS: He will rip and tear her heart(on bed).

Can't wait for this story to reached Lostbelt especially Olympus XD

Fantastic Work!

Hi there! So far, I'm really liking your story. Okay, so just a tiny bit of constructive criticism. But I think you really need to get a new beta reader. Because your current one has missed so many grammar mistakes that I wonder if they're doing it on purpose. I'm not trying to sound mean. But there's just so many grammar mistake that it's completely distracting. So many that when I'm trying to read your story, those grammar mistakes take me completely out of the story. I'm just trying to help. Alright, moving on. So, I have a feeling that you're going have the Doom Slayer and Frankenstein develop a bit of a brother and sister relationship. I think that would be pretty cool. I feel like Doomguy would be kind to Fran and be there for her. Lord knows that she needs someone like Doomguy in her life. They have so much in common. And I know for sure that Doomguy would be able to rely on Fran. I can't wait to see them bond and become close. I'm sure, they're both going to have a lot of cute, innocent, and funny moments together. Obviously, they're not going to get romantically involved. Like I said before, they'll have more of brother and sister bond. And I'm all for it. It sounds awesome! Anyways, that's all I had to say for now. Keep up the great work. See Ya Around! (Sorry, for any grammar mistakes, I may have missed in this review.)

well now that we are finally at london i really want to see doomguy wrecking goetia to a pulp given that he has the type weakness to doomslayer

This was good chapter I liked the part with Ritsuka finding who maybe is Doomslayer's wife in his earth world he was born from. It must have been many many long long centuries since Doomslayer has last remembered her and their child since their saddened deaths and the Slayer sending himself to Hell to save what remained of his world and arriving at Sentinel Prime and the amount time that had passed since even then.

Doomslayer talking to Fran was a touche moment.

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I felt like he gave an epic speech about his own experience of what he consider his home, while making connections between his situation and Fran's. As such, he is able to 'lift her up' so to speak, and allowed her to see someone who too had to leave his lively hood behind, but saw that he grown because of it. He then points out that there are people around her that she can talk to so she to can grow more, epically sense she is able to gain support where he didn't had the same support structure.

My God doomguy and fran is an adorable combo.

This was pretty good. Enjoyed how it turned out. Keep up the good work.

If this was lore Slayer he would be stomping most servants

Really good chapter. I really like It. Jack was lucky that Doomguy was holding back A LOT. if not she'd have died REALLY FAST

Have you run your work through a grammar software like grammarly yet? I highly recommend it. There's quite a few small errors which it could fix or highlight for you to edit.