im.riddikulus chapter 10 . 8/21/2011
Apart from a few spelling mistskes that was a really cute story. The writing definitely got a lot better with each chapter and was amazing towards the end :) All in all a very good, easy to read fanfiction

P.S I have to wonder about the level of detail in the smut scenes, they're quite detailed for you only being a teenager...hmmmmm, I wonder... ;D
angelamangelabangela chapter 10 . 1/22/2009

that cute!

babiiSCARS23 chapter 10 . 9/18/2007
hye i just read the whole story and i absolutely loved it )
Yenny2206 chapter 10 . 8/17/2007
I love this story.. Amazing writer
drico02 chapter 10 . 12/27/2005
a very nice story it was a pleshure to read.

thank you
x0x-Mystique-x0x chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Okay let me explain my situation to you ... lol ... I was listening to the song "Behind these Hazel eyes" by Kelly Clarkson ... and the song and the end of the chapter fit together so perfect that it got me all emotional lol ... see the part that was comig was "Here I am once again ... I'm torn into pieces, can't deny can't pretend I thought you were the one ..." and i was like "omg" when i read Hermione's thoughts at the end of the chapter ... lol okay well I LOVED IT SO FAR! I HAVE TO ... I REPEAT I HAVE TO READ MORE!

-Jasmine x0x0x
aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 10 . 1/12/2005
Bit of a pervert, aren't ya? haha, I'm just teasing... the story was really good for the first one, congrats! Just one question... you're only a teenager and yet you were able to put much detail into the sex scenes, hm.. haha. On to the next story! ~Apples~
aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 3 . 1/12/2005
O, I like! haha. I saw your name in somebody's Favorite Author list so I'm planning on attempting to catch up to your most recent stories. Hopefully by summer I'll have caught up, eh? For now though, I'll read them all and review whenever I remember/have time. Keep Writing (whatever story you're on now) and Have Happy Happenings! ~Apples~
AllisonHill chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
good job!
aWayintheWind chapter 10 . 9/9/2004
Ahh that was the sweetest thing I've ever read! All though its a shame how dirty our minds are, if you know what I mean. hehe! well anyway, expect to se my revews on your other storys!

Cassie chapter 6 . 7/24/2004
You can't apparate in Hogwarts grounds!
ginny606303 chapter 10 . 7/13/2004
great story
ratboy1234 chapter 10 . 6/24/2004
this story was vary good and it was also vary short but thats ok cuz it was a good story
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 2 . 6/23/2004
how cute! lol she shud have kissed him at that moment! i m really loving dis story!
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
hi, how cute! i m liking dis fic alot it's really cute!
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