|Reviews for The Flow of Change|
| hennessyswagg83 chapter 12 . 22h
Damn this story was good right up until and probably beyond you choose to use Western naming tradition on an Eastern culture based universe if Kishimoto didnt change his name after it was revealed he was the 4th's son why do authors continue to do so in stories where he isn't publicly know as the 4th's son from birth
| ilcgn chapter 22 . 12/1
I love this, wish this could continue but alas.
| Kingofsenju chapter 10 . 11/20
Bring this back bro
| SIMPDESTROYER chapter 22 . 10/25
Yeah bro really is dumb, he fought a sannin who's weakness he knew, blood. He could have pricked his finger and won lol, also will he really not command root?
| Darkness91 chapter 1 . 10/23
this story sucks
| Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 10/15
I agree with MonCappy.
| Child of Dreams chapter 22 . 10/15
Shouldn't Sakura face some consequences?
She stole Naruto's rent money, which caused him to lose his apartment, and you're just letting it slide?
| cj107edward chapter 9 . 9/26
Makes no sense at all. In the previous chapter, Naruto was figuring out basic algebra and how to read and use chakra control to climb a tree and now he's leading a dangerous mission as the team leader. Please make it make sense.
| cj107edward chapter 8 . 9/26
Suddenly this fanfic became so boring. I hope there's no romance. i hate the kagura shit coming up
| Red1ace86 chapter 22 . 9/18
Great story, just found it yesterday and speed read it all, and love it, hope youre well, and that we get an update,
| baron sanmdi chapter 22 . 8/26
| MonCappy chapter 1 . 8/20
What Sakura did here was completely indefensible. Now, before I continue, I should note here that under no circumstances is Naruto owed her affections in anyway. Moreover, he should have accepted her refusal to date him and moved on. His conduct hasn't in any way been acceptable and his ruse would be a form of sexual assault if he weren't so innocent.
Having said that I have to facepalm at the irony of Sakura's indignation. She resents and loathes Naruto for refusing to accept no for an answer and constantly pestering him for a date when she has categorically refused him all while doing the same thing to Sasuke. He isn't interested in her, constantly avoids her and she refuses to accept his answer all the while not seeing the irony of this situation.
Having said that, her theft of his funds was utterly disgusting and should have her expelled from Konoha's forces for stealing a comrade's money.
| Anshul Patidar chapter 17 . 8/19
you are definitely indian. surya bhagwan bhi a ge
| Anshul Patidar chapter 11 . 8/19
vish Kanya... u Indian bro . ? vish Kanya arts are 5000 year old arts
| kurianj258 chapter 12 . 8/14
Your work has interested me sempai, this is who Naruto could have been if trained by Danzo, if he had this same temperament XD