Reviews for Eclipse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so far. It's amazing. I obviously didn't finish it yet but so far so good. I just wanted to bring to your attention that... the Invisibility cloak defects all spells except Unforgivables... and that includes shrinking charms. You can't CHARM the cloak. Not even shrink it. It will defect it. So... yeah that's it. The rest is good though. *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() Wow. Like holy shit that was amazing. You are a very talented author and I have never seen anyone make their transistion from enemies to friends to lovers so well. It wasn't just a "oh i see draco not malfoy and bam forgiven" but you really made him earn it. Congragulations. You deserve a butter beer and a really great high five. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. I love the trust and friendship that's growing between Harry and Draco, and how they're both coming out of their shells. I'm excited to see where this goes. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow.. I would say that this masterpiece left me speechless but I NEED to leave a comment even tho I know there's a slim chance that you'll be able to read it now . I just want you to know that I love this and you're an amazing author. I have read each chapters all the way to your notes and .. Wow I just can't imagine someone writing some magnificent story like this while serving their country as an army, kudos to you author! you must be a great person!. I also want you to know that I have only found this work of yours recently and I finished reading this for 3 days straight and only paused for when I have to eat and take a bath because this story is highly addicting! If only I have been born earlier and was able to grow with Harry Potter, and be a drarry shipper, then I am sure that I would be able to read this work earlier and give you feedbacks on every chapter you post and even join your yahoo group, and interact with you.. but alas! I was born in the wrong generation. Anyway, I'll have you know that you made me cry a LOT especially on the last three chapters and I want to thank you for this. This fic is AMAZING that I won't be able to forget it even if I choose to.. which I don't. This is so beautiful and.. (I don't often say this especially to people I don't really know, but..I love you, thank you so much for this and I hope you're doing well now. xoxo |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. This entire thing was absolutely beautiful. I devoured all of it in a single sitting. Best thing I've ever done. Just wonderful! |
![]() ![]() Hi, I realize this fic was written over a decade ago, and you almost definitely don't read the reviews anymore, but I couldn't not leave one. This story is so beautiful. I actually cried when I read this chapter, and I don't think I've ever cried because of something I've read before. You are such an amazing author, and I just wanted to tell you how much I love your writing and to thank you for writing this. It is by far the best fan fiction I've ever read, and probably the best I'll ever read. You did a wonderful job on this. xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That part close to the end where Harry says, "We're a pretty odd pair, aren't we?", reminds me of Quirrell and Voldemort in AVPM: "Aren't we an odd couple? You won't sleep on your tummy. You won't sleep on your back. 'we're quite a cooky couple I agree. We share some hands and fingers, but still the feeling lingers..." And now I'm getting carried away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love?... Soooooooooooo cliche. Love this, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think one of the main reasons I love this and keep coming back to it is because there’s no boring areas. Literally ever. Even in the beginning, the plot literally starts on the first sentence |
![]() ![]() I loved this book. It is the best Draco X Harry book I have read so far. |
![]() ![]() I AM CRYING THAT WAS AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible! Both the story and your writing. I couldn't stop reading. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() i have read this story multiple times in the years since its last update. all i can say, after all this time, is thank you so much for this story. it is by far the best Harry and Draco story, but not only that; it feels painfully real to its core. thank you, even after over a decade. |
![]() ![]() i need a sequel my heart can’t take this |