Reviews for Eclipse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your fic gave me so much feels and really was amazing. I really thought Draco was dead at first but I could accept it with how the situation has been, it would still have been a great death alhtough I'm really glad he turned out to be alive. Still everything sounds so real and natural with the way you write and you managed to immersed the readers into the story as if we were living it from either Harry or Draco point of view. I didn't know what to expect about the ending but even if it's both sad and happy I like the way it is. I particulary loved how your ended the story. At first when I began to read the story I thought you were going to finish the series but it wasn't the case which left us wondering what could be happening after but the story was amazing enough like that and I can understand you only wanted to write about Harry's 6th year and although everything which happen was no longer than a month it really feel as if we have been living through his 6th year. I don't really have the words to express how much I liked reading your story but this is the kind of writing I'd like mine to be. Although I'm still a very long way to write something as wonderful that you did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to put a review for the final chapter after reading the whole story but I have so much to say that I don't want to forget something. I really love the story, characters development and thoughts are really great it feels so real I don't know how you do that. Everything just seems to flow naturally and I really enjoy reading something like this. I like how deep Harry and Draco are in there, we can't never quite see a full picture like you do in the books. I don't really know how to express it but I really love your writing. And now for some details I actually tried the test Draco made with Harry about the whole eye thing and I was surprised at the results. I had never thought of doing that but turned out I can only tell for sure the eye colors of my parents and for everyone else it's just a blur like how Harry reacted. I don't know the importance of it in your story but it just make it even more real, not to mention all of you descriptions. Couldn't Harry transfigure a horse? I couldn't help thinking about that when they were thinking of a way to move faster, he managed to do a rabbit so maybe a horse wouldn't have been impossible. Also weird habits, when they were wondering where were some plants I couldn't help thinking can't they just look it up on the internet? Of course it just sounds so stupid because at the time smartphone didn't even exist and not even when you wrote the story I think. But it just sounds very practical nowadays and for wizards to have their own internet wouldn't been impossible. There is also obviously things different from the books since your wrote before the two last came out but I don't really mind how you turned things out. I think Narcissa really cares about Draco though but it seems you're going into that way. As for Wormtail it would have been nice if his reason was so "noble" xD I really think he just betrayed James because he was afraid of Voldemort unfortunately. Although I love all the hints about other sexual orientation, I didn't mind it before because I was barely awared of everything else which exist but now it just seems narrow-minded to me to stay into the heteronormative case. And I guess I said everything I wanted to this far into the story. I'm really glad someone shared it with me because it's really amazing and it doesn't feel like it has been written so long ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. You made me cry twice while reading your story. I loved it. Their feelings, their doubts, fears, all was so well described. I liked how they fell for each other little by little. You really have written a nice love story. I especially liked the poisons, all that talk about their strenghts and weaknesses in magic. How they were able to overcome their tumultuous past. I think other characters were also well described, Ron, Hermione, Snape and Dumbledore. Your story was nice, long, funny at time, profound, filled with angst, sadness, anger and also dedication and love. I liked your depiction of their travel. How you managed to paint the landscape, with pictures, smells, sounds, textures... I really liked the part near the river where Harry help Draco to enter the water. The meadow where the fairies were dancing was beautiful. And the bank of the lake was another nice location. Your depictions of plants and trees was nice. It made me really enter inside this forest, following their travel along them. Question : does Draco still have a Grinfindor socks at his feet, transfigured from a slug ? It's so funny to picture his face when he will discover that fact. Well a truly nice story, a little jewel |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfiction is one of the best Harry/Draco fics I have ever read. Really. The writting and vocabulary and the emotion, all feel so real and touched and just so painfully beautiful. How the writer put two guys in such a miserable situation that force them to rethink about their lives and their thoughts towards each other. How Draco sarcrificed himself to protect Harry and how Harry did the same thing. It is just wonderful, how Mijan did justice to their relationship. Thank you so much for such a masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved your story. you got great potential,they were so much in character and I felt every emotion that they went through. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and sharing with us. I have one doubt though, after the encounter with the death eaters at the river why did they stop following our boys? if possible please reply |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i so love this fic! its so awesome, believable, well written, emotional, sweet, just a dream to read! thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still reading the first half of the fanfiction, so maybe it will be explained later, but I wonder why Draco and Harry couldn't apparate with Biddy. Even if they couldn't because they're humans and can't apparate inside Hogwarts even with the help of an elf, they could have apparated just outside the wards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I posted this review anonymously on accident and decided to redo it s myself :) Hi there! I have no idea if this review will reach you, as it's been 15 years (holy crap!) since it was completed. But I figured I'd try anyway. I absolutely adored this story. Everyone was perfectly in character, everything was believable, and the ending was perfect. And for having been written before all of the books were even released, this stuck amazingly close to canon! The writing was spot on - realistic, descriptive, perfectly paced - and I'm so glad I discovered it after all this time. This is definitely going on my list of favorites! I'm especially impressed that you were able to write all of this while in the Army. So, kudos to you - you wrote one heck of a story. :) |
![]() ![]() Hi there! I have no idea if this review will reach you, as it's been 15 years (holy crap!) since it was completed. But I figured I'd try anyway. I absolutely adored this story. Everyone was perfectly in character, everything was believable, and the ending was perfect. And for having been written before all of the books were even released, this stuck amazingly close to canon! The writing was spot on - realistic, descriptive, perfectly paced - and I'm so glad I discovered it after all this time. This is definitely going on my list of favorites! I'm especially impressed that you were able to write all of this while in the Army. So, kudos to you - you wrote one heck of a story. :) |
![]() ![]() I remember when I was 13 and staying up late into the night with just the glow of the computer, completely absorbed in your story. It is beautifully written, emotional, brave, exciting, and holds so much knowledge. I am still (13 years later) blown away with your talent and am currently reading your story again. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely amazing. I don't know what to say. *tries to recover from that emotional roller coaster* Thank you very, very much for writing this! I shall now be checking out your profile for any other stories you have written. Thanks again, I hope you keep fanfic-ing! :) |
![]() ![]() My. Word. That... Was just absolutley too fantastic. |
![]() ![]() This will always be my favorite Drarry. I swear it get better every time I read it:) |
![]() ![]() Using "Wake Me Up When September Ends" was honestly so perfect for the end of chapter song:) |