Reviews for Eclipse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yo. This is one of my favorite stories of all time and I'm rereading it. I forget how long ago you wrote this, before the sixth book was out and as I was reading this chapter it occurred to me how close you were with the description of Voldemort and Harry being connected: by blood in your story and soul in cannon. Anyway, I got really excited and wanted to tell you HOW AMAZING THIS STORY IS AGH. thank you |
![]() ![]() O damn. Too tragic! Reading this made me cry a river of tears...;( it was very self searching and all about figuring out one's self but sadly this is no HEA. I still don't like how Draco had stabbed Harry and brought him to the Dark Lord..I hate him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lovw this so far! draco's thoughts on harry are so intriguing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greatest Drarry fic ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just dont know what to say. And that's a first cause I never stop talking. this BRILLIANY piece of work was just... STUNNING. It made me laugh, it made me cry and squeal and hope! I loved watching their progression, from enemies, to almost-but-not-really friends, to actual deep friends which slowly progressed to a much deeper love. one of my favourite scenes was the one in the beginning with the difference between power and strength. that got to me. another one of my absolute favourite was the one with Draco's fear of water and overcoming it. I loved to see wormtails bit in it and the little peeks of Ron and Hermione and even Dumbledore's thoughts. I loved the hints from draco, and the eye colour questions and how harry couldn't remember Cho's or Lavender's. I adored the Eclipse scene and their dance. I loved Harry's experience with Draco in the dream scape, and I ADORED this final scene and the final words, especially. "You never left me, and I promise I'll never leave can't describe how much I love this story and since its the first Drarry I've read, its set such a high bar for the rest. I hope you continue writing because the pure talent you have should never go to waste. I love this story and its going to be a classic for me I can tellone that I will save and read over and over again on train journeys and plane rides, or even curled up with a mug of hot cocoa. thank you so much for sharing it. -Abby xxx |
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![]() ![]() I promised myself I wouldn't cry reading this, but bloody hell and all things holy, I couldn't keep that promise. God, I don't think that a fanfiction has ever made me so emotional-I actually SQUEAKED when they kissed. (I think I may have woken up my mother, as I was up all night reading this, and I've never been very good at muffling my excitement over anything. I'm just a loud person.) I want to say thank you for writing such an amazing story, and I want you to know that I will never be the same after reading this. Jesus on a bicycle, I am such a freaking DORK! Gah, I'm sappy. Anyway, thank you. ~Blake |
![]() ![]() This entire chapter, I was switching between nearly hyperventilating and telling myself over and over not to cry...bloody hell... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm really into the story so far but there are a couple of plot holes, innit? I love the characterisations but Draco fully redeemed in three days is a bit of a stretch. Anywho, you've explained that enough. And why why why didn't Biddy just side along apparate them to Hogsmeade?! Probably for this story to advance, I know but I can't help screaming at Harry inside my head :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() ¿Bueno que puedo decir aparte de que esta historia es asombrosa? pues seguramente describir el porque es tan fascinante XD. La ame los personajes no estuvieron occ, el ambiente estuvo perfecto Y poseía una excelente ortografía, hasta el final de la historia te envuelve hace que te sientas triste por a verla terminado y feliz por el gratificante y tierno final. En conclusión SIMPLEMENTE FASCINANTE. Con amor Kirily Brief Rosh |
![]() ![]() Great story, just a real gem! Your writing style is phenomenal, with enough detail to give the reader an image in their head without boring them to death with long winded descriptions. It's very rare for me to feel moved by a piece of writing but you seem to do it perfectly. Normally I would have tips or critiscisms, but I honestly have nothing but praises to give. You've got a real knack for this, a talent! I am looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future, especially if that work includes a sequel! Best regards! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow 2006..this fic is still amazing 10 years after it was finished..thank you for your amazing work! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for a well written and thought out story. I really enjoy the trip with you. best of luck. |