Reviews for Eclipse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when yahoo groups preceded before Discord. Man, this is a throwback to when technology was real. Now, it's all wizardry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah yes because plantain grows plentiful in the tropical forests of Scotland |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot and the character development are simply amazing. Thank you so much for your incredible job. |
![]() ![]() I know that you probably won't see this given that this fic began 17 years ago, but it felt criminal not to leave a review. This was truly one of the most incredible stories that I have ever read, thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly I hate how they’re treating Harry now that he got back. I get that they’re worried but they aren’t entitled to anything and there’s a better way to ask about what happened. They don’t know what Harry’s been through and they shouldn’t react this way. But either way I still really liked everything else especially Hermione having logic and giving Draco a chance |
![]() ![]() ![]() But I mean Draco also knows deep down that if he doesn’t follow the Dark Lord his family and him would be killed. Harry should know that too and I love this but honestly what can he do? He has no power or strength to go against the dark lord and if he did he would just be hunted down. So no he really doesn’t have a choice and even if he took responsibility for his actions it wouldn’t magically make him safe. Also the ‘good side’ wouldn’t trust him due to the decisions of his ancestors and if he disobeyed the dark lord they wouldn’t help him. Even if they did help they all wouldn’t care for him and he’d technically be alone with people who would watch his every move and probably not mind leaving him behind. Sorry but I just had to get it out. Either way I’m loving this! |
![]() ![]() This story is about a decade old and I just finished reading it. I have to say you put your heart and soul into writing it. In between the lines, I realize so many things about life choices and facing fears too. Maybe it felt like reassuring about choices I made too. The story was really beautiful, and I must say you are really a talented writer. Please continue to write. |
![]() ![]() I know, the story's almost 17 years old (that's crazy, I'm 17 as well and found the story even though it was published so long ago) and I can't imagine that you'll read this review but I really have to leave a comment unless I want to go to bed with a guilty conscience! This story is so incredibly good and I don't know how to put into words how much I liked this story (and that's not because I'm not speaking English fluently [I'm from Germany which explains my spelling and grammar mistakes :D]) but nevertheless, I will try it: The story is so beautiful and I think that the plot wasn't that unrealistic: I mean, the boys had a lot of fights, there were some complications and the end of the story was everything but a perfect situation for everyone. But even though or rather just because of that, it was such a gorgeous story. But there is one thing that impressed me the most: Your literacy was (or rather is) overwhelming. You expressed the thoughts, feelings and actions of every character so detailed that I was able to empathize with all of them. The happiness, sadness, helplessness, fear, love... It all was described in detail and I felt so many different emotions while reading. I also have to admit that I was crying my eyes out in the last few chapters and sometimes I really had difficulties with continuing to read because the letters seemed to be blurred because of my tears. It took you two years to write this story (which makes sense, I can see the effort you put into this story and I'm really glad you did) but I've read it in three or four days because I couldn't stop. The last few days I was awake until I couldn't manage to keep my eyes open (which was around 4 am) because I was delved into this book. I hope that everything I'm saying makes sense to you (my English skills are really bad :D). I wish you all the best! Yours sincerely Julia :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story cured my temporary depression... |
![]() ![]() Respect for still doing this during such a turbulent time. F |
![]() ![]() The water spell is 'Aquamenti'. I still love this, though. |
![]() ![]() Honestly this is probably the best Harry/Draco story I've ever read. You got their personalities and their real moral struggles nailed. I literally can't stop reading this. |
![]() ![]() I don’t know if you will read this, if you’re even active here anymore 14 years from writing this fic. But if you do, what you’ve done with a keyboard on an empty white document is beautiful, and I hope life played your cards right. Bee |
![]() ![]() Very very excellent... definitely did not stay up until 5 in the morning to finish reading it... |
![]() ![]() Oh my fucking god! That was hand's down the best story I ever read. Seriously, amazing. I was sooo captured and couldn't stop reading. Truly an amazing job you did there. Thank you so much for sharing! |