|Reviews for 999 Miles to Go|
| Academy6 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Omg so cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Such a good story! If this happened in the manga, i would be on the edge of my seat! Awesome story! :)
| pinkperson chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Aw, that was very good. I love the simplicity of the story. I'd feel so hurt if my brother didn't trust me about something as silly as how fast to drive around a curve :P...or was too stubborn to listen. But it was sweet how Yuki apologized. And I liked the little argument about the heat in the car.
| Pandawootwoot chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
that was very sweet!
| Queen Violet of the Underworld chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Such a cute story! You really captured Ayame well, and you had an amazing balance of his deep side and hyper side in exactly the right places. I always thought that though Yuki hates Ayame talking, he'd be even more creeped out by a silent Ayame, so I was super psyched to see that idea here! Great minds think alike! _ All in all, great job!
| MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Aw, that was sweet, and something that I can definitely imagine happening!
| fireblazie chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I LOVED THIS. It was so, so, so them. Ayame's ramblings and his mature, adult side that Yuki so rarely sees... I love how he was able to take control of the car so calmly, so quickly. And how the two brothers were able to sort of, hm, see eye to eye? At least a little bit better. And the end, where Yuki can't stand Ayame being silent and just demands the story anyway. SO, SO, SO GOOD. We need more Ayame/Yuki brotherly interaction fics.
| Arisu Takahashi chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Everything about your story is perfect except for one thing: it's confusing how Yuki suddenly brings up the heat.
I love your work! This is excellent. You portrayed the characters exceptionally well.
| LookOutShe'sGotAPen chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Wow. I really loved this. This was great- you captured Ayame and Yuki's relationship perfectly. And that is no easy feat, so kudos to you!
Beautifully written, and very descriptive- a truly wonderfully written fanfiction!
Keep up the amazing work!
- LOSGAP D
| Lilly-Anne chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I love the part where Yuki is planning to kill Shigure! Ayame is a little OOC but it works. I love it!
| Everystep chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved this! The characters were spot on and your spelling and grammar is great (THANK YOU for that, by the way). And I love the song you referenced haha. Great job!
| JulyPie chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Aww, how cute! Ayame rules!
| Topaz Raven chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This was such a cute/sweet/funny story! Everyone was so in character and I do adore the 'brotherly bond' of Ayame and Yuki.
| DreamaDove93 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
how cute, they're really getting close and I can really see this happening
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
this is pretty good, could you make it longer? Include the rest of the weekend at the hotsprings and maybe the trip home.