Reviews for Out of Time
Guest chapter 11 . 1/17
Amazing plot! Update soon plz.
mademoiselle noir21 chapter 11 . 1/14
Please, I love you history so much I am dying in here for a updated! I love so much honestly! Is so good writing and so like…. Magnificent; I am Emotionally and physically involved in this history. Pleaseeeeee updated jokes at part how come Victoria don’t see the simultaneities between human Bella and vampire bela? Like I get the are the same people and different at the same time
But like…. The are very a like physically so never crossed her mind that maybe she(human Bella) is bela descendants of relatives to her somehow?! Come Victoria get together!
Shadowbolt64 chapter 11 . 1/7
Oh my dogs. I ended up binge reading this whole thing while trying to do work. This was very dangerous. I kept myself from reading it for the longest time cause the premise seemed to similar to Temperamental Tide from Avanwolf. Very glad that I started to read.

Kid Kate is best characterization no lie and very interesting to see what you have in store for the sword and shield dynamic.

Thank you for sharing
sara-nadia chapter 10 . 1/5
please upadte soon i love it
sara-nadia chapter 11 . 1/5
update soon please
Carnage.ssss chapter 9 . 1/3
Jesus! Kung Fu Panda reference... reallyMan I really like that
agirl00z chapter 11 . 12/20/2021
It was sad and heartbreaking (which is why it took me a few days to finish it), but so beautifully done I love the character depth.
The tangle of intersecting stories and the consequences created for their futures is amazing, can't wait for resulting confrontations.
Vicky and Sasha's parallels for chillingly compelling; and Bella and Vicky being past friends even for a short instant is making what ever happened/will happen all the more exciting to see.
Amazing update, stay safe. Happy Holidays.
Lemonmelons chapter 11 . 12/13/2021
Hey, thank you for writing this!
Now I'm at the last chapter and have to wait for you to publish an update like everyone else. I hope you will. I like how you've woven all the strands together.
Temporal Tide and Tossing Stones are unforgotten, and this fits right in with it,
Bd26y chapter 1 . 12/13/2021
Found this story on ao3 and I fell in love with it, so glad it has more chapters on here. I love the time-travel concept going on
TotesRadAF chapter 9 . 12/12/2021
Did I detect a Kung fu panda reference in this chapter? If so, bravo. If not…maybe I watch too many kids movies lol-great story so far!
Lemonmelons chapter 10 . 12/12/2021
Whoa that was emotional.
Fuck them all, but mostly Aro and Sasha. Poor kids. Wonder how Carmen came to be a mother figure when Tanya is the leader and clearly none of the girls are ready for someone to step up and take Sashas place, hurt as they are.
Now. What's really puzzling, though, is: How and why did Bela meet -and turn?- Victoria? OR did she not turn her but, as a part of the Volturi, punish her coven?
But then... why... why is Bela not giving the Denalis pointers? Or maybe she can start to now that she understands a bit more about the different timelines...
rukittenme chapter 11 . 12/10/2021
OMG you did it again and I am still in love with you for it. So sorry it took so long to finish reading the chapter but I was mainly waiting to read it on my birthday as a present to myself. and let me just say it was the best present ever! I can’t believe you’re making me fall in love with all of these characters when I know they’re gonna die :( but it’s ok I’ll love them anyway
I hope life’s going good for you! Thank you for the chapter! Love you bye
Lemonmelons chapter 5 . 12/10/2021
Awwwwwwwww so,cute
SandandSea1 chapter 9 . 12/10/2021
You said you "almost cried"? Fuck it! I DID cry! It was so sad. And I was so invested, even knowing what the outcome ultimately was gonna be. Fucking Sasha. *deep breath* Anyway, another excellent chapter. Hella long, I can't believe that this is only Chapter 10. And there's something that happens with Bela and Victoria's old coven you hint at? Lol. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out. Thanks for the read.
SandandSea1 chapter 10 . 12/9/2021
I'm really happy you wrote this story. I don't think I've ever read one where the Denali's background concerning Sasha was explained in detail and their consequent caution for the Volturi. I'm glad I got to read this because it's now part of my head cannon. Thanks for the read.
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