Nice four chapters

Hah, I was right. Zelda does know a thing or two! Now I'm curious about Ganondorf though. Is he manipulating everyone into the journey to the desert, or is it just a happy coincidence?

I really like Ganon here. I wonder if his mother is Gerudo, or if he's having any personal feelings about this quest. I reckon Zelda may be suspecting more than she lets on about the hero thing too...

I really like it so far. I don't know much about Zelda but you write well and the world is easy to imagine in my mind.

Aw, this is a really cute start! I like original adventures like this. And having it start out with them knowing Ganon is an interesting take!

You might want to double-check the formatting. I think it got messed up somehow when you uploaded.