Reviews for 2020 Premiseverse Writing Contest : One-Shot Fics |
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Conner Bixby chapter 8 . 10/5/2020 Vorcha . Together. Strong. |
Dude chapter 12 . 10/4/2020 I hope the asari and the salarians don’t mind the vtube invasion |
Lupo359 chapter 12 . 10/1/2020 All of these one-shots where really good but the Regilus and Vorcha atre def my favs. Really good work by everyone who took part! |
Nogui chapter 12 . 10/1/2020 I could call them messed up, but that'd be the understatement of the year. They are the closest thing to actual demons. I like how Rasa keeps trying but will never achieve the nothingness she seeks. Because she """""loves""""" Brooks (I nearly choked at the word, but you get the point). And Brooks isn't even a real person at this point, just a doll that reflects her """lover""" (chokes), GASCAR be dammed. Their menace is also done well, at the meeting. Trellani having biotics prepped, and Harper being like "Nope. Not pulling the pin on that grenade" when asked to remove them. The description of how they killed the woman is within what I expected. Glad I took the decision to not be eating while reading this. This was good. I think you two did a good job. |
Nogui chapter 11 . 10/1/2020 Holy was so good I'd forgot it was a simulation. I love Erin's banter. And ovaries of steel. This was really good. |
TheRealEnigmaticOne chapter 11 . 9/30/2020 It really is sad. The Deathwatch took away a woman who could have steered Maxwell away from Novensiles, and made the System Alliance... well, less horrible. It may be necessary to commit hard acts in the Premiseverse, but never cruelty? Never. |
Janizary chapter 5 . 9/22/2020 Nicely done. Love the bit about conditioning the Commissars. Be careful how you train your dogs and all... :) |
Janizary chapter 4 . 9/22/2020 Well, that (the fly thing) cannot be unseen. I just had to look it up. Shudder. Excellent work. |
Janizary chapter 3 . 9/21/2020 Excellent. Nice change up and look into a different aspect of your premiseverse. |
rjohanek chapter 3 . 9/15/2020 Wow! That was soooo good! Really emotionally impactful and creative. |
aliecd chapter 3 . 9/14/2020 I love your writing, every single chracter feels fleshed out |
April Cain chapter 3 . 9/14/2020 Thank you, this was a very moving story. Through your writing, you bring back the sheer joy I had discovering Mass Effect. Your Shepard is very similar to how I imagined her to be myself...again, thank you for continuing to write. |
MonkeyEpoxy chapter 3 . 9/13/2020 LP, this might be the finest thing you've ever written. Technically, thematically, and most importantly, emotionally, beautiful. My finest kudos. |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/13/2020 That was utterly superb. Thank you! |
Argosaxelcaos chapter 3 . 9/13/2020 Lovely and heartwarming. Are you feeling ok? Just kidding, we definately need more of this in the PV. Also I was thinking, didn't Shepard sell out the Black Rim Movement to the Salarian govmnt to get them to the table? Maybe I have it wrong but that is what I thought happened, if so, it's better poor salarian never met his hero (or at least talked to her). And Colms did an awesome 180! And Shepard just thinks he turned into a fanboy. I'm seeing a pattern here ;p |