Reviews for Separated
Sammy girl chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
Nooooooo! I swear to god. This was soooo good. Ugh!
Sammy girl chapter 5 . 1/12/2014
Ok first I want to say that Ms. Vide reminds me of an onion. And second this chapter made me cry. Foster homes are cruel places. I would know.
lovelygold chapter 22 . 7/19/2013
awwww luv this story! i think you should add more johnny n pony time in here! like a fluffy chapter with em talkin. pluuuuuus can i have ur tennis coach? mine aint hot cus ya know he is kinda old (i tried to say that as nicely as possible į—į ) plz update soon and dun stay gold! wait...
tardissoul chapter 20 . 4/1/2013
The LOTR quote was perfect!
UnlimitedPriceless chapter 22 . 2/23/2013
You have to I mean have to update this you just can't leave this sory. It's just to good to leave it.
HakuHunterNatural chapter 22 . 1/12/2013
Update! It's been almost 8 years!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Natalie chapter 11 . 9/9/2012
Should've called him a nerdy-monkey butt with the personality of a drunk narwal
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
My breath was coming in short, ragged gasps and the extra burst of energy adrenaline caused was being used up fast. I forced my aching limbs to keep moving, but I knew I'd never get home in time

Wait so let me get this straight, ponyboy can run ten Miles but he can't run away from a couple of socs who are a heck of a lot slower than him? Thats logical...
Lilycius chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
On a average track feel 4 laps is a mile, if ponyboy ran 40 laps during his meet,your claiming that his coach made him run 10 miles during a practice... Do you even do your research?

And sorry if that came out a bit harsh but, that just really annoyed me.
CHICK1966 chapter 22 . 6/14/2012
ForgottenDreamer98 chapter 22 . 2/6/2012
I hate it when people make awesome fics but then abandon it right when it gets good! Not only did you abandon it but you abandoned your whole account all t
ForgottenDreamer98 chapter 8 . 2/2/2012
I thought this kinda funny in a way but my name is also Aislinn! Except it's a-i-s-l-i-n-n not a-i-s-l-y-n-n. I just thought that kinda funny. Well anyway I'm liking the story so far. I usually don't review in the middle of a story but I just had to because of the name thing lol
MoreHeartThanAche chapter 22 . 10/28/2011
er, the ending, where is it please please pleeeease write it please. Do it for me and Pony and whoever else cares. :)
MoreHeartThanAche chapter 17 . 10/28/2011
YES i was right: He looked so small and lost. Suddenly, I realized who he was reminding me of: those wide fear-filled eyes, the way he jumped at every slight sound. Johnny Cade. I said that somebody, well I said Pony, would notice that he seemed like Johnny. One point to me.
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